dobry list, tylko kilka poprawek, czasem pomimo ze gramatyka jest dobra, zdanie 'brzmi' dziwnie lub nie pasuje cos do czegos, ale ogolnie bardzo dobrze, wiec staralam sie zmienic jak najmniej
>I`m in France. We have holidays now.
I am in France on a holiday.
How are you? Do you have
>holidays, too?
czemu pytanie do tej osoby, uwazam ze nie potrzebne, poza tym w tym czasie pytasz sie czy on miewa wakacjie, jesli chodzi o teraz to pytanie powinno brzmiec 'Are you having a holiday as well?
I have been in Paris, France since last Monday.
nie trzeba 'France', juz bylo powidziane w pierwszym zdaniu
I`m
>staying in a Kingdoom Hotel next to the Eiffel tower. It has an
>impressive view.
in THE Kingdom, which is next ....
w nastepnym zdaniu nie wiadomo do czego 'it' sie odnosi - hotelu czy wiezy
>
>The weather is good. So far I have been to Luwr, on the Eiffel tower,
>and many other places whose names I don't remember
... been to THE Louvre, the Eiffel tower, ('whose' uzywamy do ludzi) dopiero co bylas i nie pamietasz? lepiej napisz: and many other beautiful places.
>
>Every night I go out.
I go out every night. najpierw osoba
The nightlife starts at about 10 p.m.
Nightlife in Paris (przypomnij czytelnikowi gdzie) starts around 10PM (tak ja napisane tez moze byc)
People go
>out and they are very friendly. They like talking to every one, and
>they like meeting new people.
People? jacy people? jest poprawne, ale nie potrzebne 'go out'; moze: Parisians
are very friendly.
>
>What about food? I can eat my national food, but I can eat their
>national food with a glass of wine, too.
dlaczego pytanie? pisz od razu o jedzeniu; czy chodzi tutaj o wybor?
I can choose between different types of cuisine. I can eat Polish food, but I prefer French dishes and a glass of wine.
It`s delicious. I`m going to
>stay here for about 2 days and then I'm going to Barcelona in Spain to
>see a football match.
.... Barcelona, Spain
>
>I regret very much that you can't be with me here. Maybe you will come
>to Paris with me next time?
nie trzeba 'very much'
zamiast will - can i bez ?
>
>I will be finishing because I have to do the shopping. I don`t have
>enough time to do everything in this superb country.
I will end/finish my letter now because I have to go shopping. There is not enough .......