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Od niedawna zaczęłam naukę języka, jednakże stanęłam przed obliczem napisania rozprawki. Proszę o sprawdzenie błędów i ich skorygowanie oraz proszę o wyrozumiałość w sprawie moich błędów :)

Some people believe that doing sport at school is a distraction from more important work. I will try to give my own opinion and to propose ways for students to do more sport at school without causing problems for their studies.
In my opinion students have too much science, so they do not like sports, because sports make they tired. They must often learn for exams. Firstly, some teenagers like sports like runing, play volleyball or basketball, but they do not time so as to learn. They must have to make a decision. They can do sports and have worse marks or they can a little leave sports and have better marks. In my school I have three hours a sports in week, but one of them is theoretical PE, so two hours we can play basketball or volleyball. Secondly, I think that other subject are more important than PE, because we won't pass a matura of PE but subjects like biology, chemist or physics. In my opinion school can give us a choice about choose kinds of sports. This way, we could choose for example fitness or gymnastic. What is more, teenagers should restrict the use of mobile phones. Then they will have more time to sport and study. Besides, sports do us healthier, and allow to rest our brain. We should do favourite activities 3 times a week.
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