please check my memo

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To: CEO
From: Mr Alex Zorba, Diroector of Valentino Chocolates
Subject: Investment plan
Date: 27th of April 2006

In recent years Valentino has become one of Europe`s leading brand of
chocolate. It is now ready to become a succesful international business. The
Board of Directors has agreed the following investment plan. First of all we
decide to invest in more resarch and development because new, innovatives
products are profitable. For better and faster production we will buy a new
machinery. To increase our selling important is plough a marketing campaigne.
Nowadays valid market is E-Market, so we have to set up online sales. Next aim
is invest in US market. This is large outlet and our products should appear
there. And last but weighty point is invest ina an existing group of cafes. It
will be great promotion and way of selling of Valentino`s Chocolates.

If You approve my plan, please let me know your point of view about
progress of our business as soon as possible.

"leading brand of chocolate" troche dziwnie brzmi, moze "choclate business leader", a kolejnym zdaniu "international corporation".rn"to invest more in......, because innovations are...."rn"the new machinery", jakby nie bylo sa "defined", jako "new"(chyba).rn"Also, it is important to plough a marketing campaign in order to increase our sales performance".rn"next aim is TO invest in the United Sates market for it provides many recipients, therefore our products should apper there. "rn"And last....is TO invest..." rn"It would be a great promotion for the company and would provide another source of Valentino's Choclates' recipients."rn"Should you have any questions regarding my plan, do not hesitate to caontact me and present your point of wiev...."rnrnto tylko propozycje do rozwazenia:)

....we decideD to invest in more...
...new innovative products are more profitable.
...will buy new machinery (bez a)
To increase our selling potential it is important to invest in a marketing campaign.
Nowadays, the most important market appears to be E-market...
Our next aim is to... This is A large outlet
The last but nevertheless an important point is to invest in an...
It will be of great promotional value and a good way of selling Valentino's...

Mam pytanie, skąd to wzięłaś? Do czego jest to zadanie??? Z jakiejś książki??Pozdrawiam