sprawdzenie listu motyw.

Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
Witam,
bardzo proszę o pomoc, prosze o sprawdzenie poniższego listu motywacyjnego, dziękuję z góry za pomoc.


PERSONAL DETAILS:
NAME: xxxxxx
DATE OF BIRTH: xxxxxxxx
ADDRESS: xxxxxxx
EMAIL: xxxxxx
MOBILE PHONE: xxxxxx

EDUCATION:

xxxxxxxx SILESIAN UNIVERSITY –HUMAN RESOURCES - postgraduate education training
xxxxxxxx UNIVERSITY OF PEDAGOGICS
Master of pedagogics
xxxxxxx High School
specjalization: math-IT

TRAINING:
xxxxx WORKTIME AND LEAVES
xxxxxx CHANGES IN LABOUR LAW IN 2004
xxxxxx SOCIAL SECURITY AFTER 01.05.2004
xxxxx PERSONAL AND SALARY SPECIALIST
xxxxxx PŁATNIK

WORK EXPERIENCE

xxx-xxxx bbbbbb
SPECIALIST OF CREDITS
(RESPONSIBLE FOR SOLD CREDITS, CONSUMER SERVICE, RAPORTED TO CENTRALA)

xxxx-xxxx bbbbb
CLERK IN ACCOUNT AND ADMINISTRACION
(CONSUMER SERVICE, ACCONTED, HR AND SALARY SERVICE, CONTACT WITH ZUS AND US)

xxxx-xxxx bbbbbbbb
ASSISTANCE OFFICE
ASSISTANCE ACCOUNTS AND HR DEPARTMENT

xxxx-xxxx BBBBB
ASSISTANCE OF PRESIDENT OF THE MANAGMENT BOARD
(CUSTOMER SERVICE, PREPERED WHOLE CORESPONDENCE, SERVICE SECRETARIAT)

xxxx-xxxx BBBB
HR AND SALARY SPECIALIST
ADMINISTRACION PERSONAL DATA OF EMPLOYEES, PREPARATED OF JOB CONTRACT AND OTHER HR RELATED DOCUMENTATION, ACCOUNTED TIMEWORK, RESPONSIBILITY TO CONTAC WITH US, GUS, PFRON AND PREPERED DOCUMENTATION TO THEM, MADE/PREPERED PAYROLL

XXXX – STILL bbbbbbbbbb
PERSONAL AND SALARY SPECIALIST
ADMINISTERED PERSONAL DATA OF EMPLOYEES, PREPARATED OF JOB CONTRACT AND OTHER HR RELATED DOCUMENTATION, ACCOUNTED TIMEWORK, RESPONSIBILITY TO CONTACT WITH US, GUS, PFRON AND PREPERED DOCUMENTATION TO THEM, MADE/PREPERED PAYROLL, REPORTING TO CENTRAL IN SPANE (PROMOTION, RICES, DISSMISSAL, LEAVES, SALARY).

SKILLS:


GOOD KNOWLEDGE OF STANDARD OFFICE, HR AND SALARY SOFTWARE (WORD, EXCEL, SYMFONIA, TETA, PŁATNIK), INCLUDING E-MAIL AND THE INTERNET, DRIVING LICENCE CAT. B

LANGUAGES:
POLISH – NATIVE
ENGLISH – STILL LEARNING

HOBBY:
PSYCHOLOGY, SUSPENSE AND HORROR BOOKS
hej
nie jestem pewna czy dobrze rozumiem ze chodzi ci o list motywacyjny tzw cover letter?
bo jesli tak to zupelnie ci sie to pomieszalo z CV.
w liscie motywacyjnym piszesz o tym dlaczego aplikuesz na dane stanowisko, nastepnie uzasadniasz umiejetnisciami i doswiadczeniem doslownie w 3-4 zdaniach
dopisuiac "My experience relating to that field is described in attached CV"
bo oczywiscie zakladamy ze list wysylasz razem zCV.

pozniej jeszcze jeden akapit o yym jakim to ambitnym, pracowiyym i zespolowym typem jestes i tyle, nie wiecej niz na pol strony.
myslisz ze jak ktos ma do przeczytania 50 listow to bedzie czytal taka litanie o nie.
a i mozesz zakonczyc o tak:
Should you have no openings at present, I would be grateful if you would consider me if any vacancies arise in the future.
mam nadzieje ze troche pomoglam
pozdrawiam i powodzenia

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