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Dear Sir/ Madam
I am writing to ask for more information about your house sale. I have found your advertisement in the newspaper.
I would like to buy a flat in the centre of town. Could you please send me more details about conveniently located. How far is it to the public transport and shops.? I have not a car so I must have a different transport.
i would like to know if there is a shower in the bathroom. Has The house been redecorated? It is very important to me. I would like to know more information about environment. Are there fitness club ? I like to active lifestyle.
Where else I can spend my free time? Is there a theater or cinema?
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully.
XYZ.

I have not a car so I must have a different transport. - zdanie jest napisane niepoprawnie. powinno być (moim zdaniem) I don't have any car so I have to have different transport.
I like to active lifestyle ? Wydaje mi się, że powinno być I like active lifestyle.
To tyle z mojej strony. Jestem dopiero w pierwszej klasie technikum, ale z angielskim radzę sobie świetnie, więc jeszcze nie umiem wszystkiego. Ale mam nadzieję, że chociaż trochę pomogłam :)

*****I have not a car so I must have a different transport. - zdanie jest napisane niepoprawnie. powinno być (moim zdaniem)
I don't have 'any' A car so I have to have different (means of) transport.
>>>>Jestem dopiero w pierwszej klasie technikum, ale z angielskim radzę sobie świetnie, więc jeszcze nie umiem wszystkiego.
...tutaj nie musisz sie spowiadac....;-)

I don't have 'any' A car

or just

I don't have a car.... (it is much easier)

Could you please send me more details about ANY FLATS THAT ARE conveniently located. How far is it to the public transport and shops? I DO NOT OWN A CAR so I must have ACCESS TO different transport.
i would like to know if there is a shower in the bathroom. Has The house been redecorated? It is very important to me. I would like to FIND OUT more information about THE environment. Are there ANY fitness clubS IN THE AREA ? I ENJOY AN active lifestyle.
Where else can I spend my free time? Is there a theater or A cinema NEARBY?
I look forward to hearing from you.

'I DON'T HAVE ANY CAR' IS INORRECT. Any is very often used with uncountable and plural verbs. Here is neither 'uncountable' nor 'plural' so, the sentence below is correct only:
I haven't got a car or I haven't a car. Similarly, we use indefinite article a/an in the questioning tribe : Is there A tin-opener in the house. ( and not: is there Any tin-opener...)
regards :)

>>questioning tribe<<

you mean the Whoux?

..or maybe Cherokee ?

@drudziu
>>I DON'T HAVE ANY CAR' IS INORRECT

It's incorrect in the asker's context but not necessarliy so when 'any' is stressed ans assertive.
It is used with cout nouns.

I'm half-stewed today or what ? :) cut 'so' ..