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When we think about the nature of United States we tend to imagine for example about sunny California, cold and faraway Alaska, the Great Lakes, the oldest National Prak Yellowstone or amazing Grand Canyon. The nature of the USA is beautiful and spectacular but we also know that the Earth is not static and the nature in the USA is also dangerous and deadly.
Despite of the fact that the USA are the richest country on the world and in spite of government of USA allocates a lot of money on prevent natural disaster it several hundred Americans die in the natural catastrophes every year . So let’s look at the nature of United States from a slightly different perspective.

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In the past, America was perceived as a Promised Land. Today perhaps its glamour does not shine as it used to. But one thing which has not changed is the beauty and diversity of America’s landscapes. But on the other hand the nature of USA is actually dangerous and deadly. The strong tornadoes, deadly earthquakes, huge hurricanes and volcanoes about which I wrote in this thesis, it reap the deadly harvest every year not only at the USA but also all over the world. Although the growing knowledge, technology and methods prevention and adumbrations, we should have make estimates for the nature.

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When we think about the nature of IN THE United States, we tend to imagine, for example, about[nie potrzebne] sunny California, cold and faraway Alaska, the Great Lakes, the oldest [National Prak Yellowstone...kolejnosc slow] or [cos tu brakuje]amazing Grand Canyon. The Nature ofIN the USA is beautiful and spectacular, but we also know that the Earth is not static and THAT the FORCES OF nature in the USA is CAN also BE dangerous and deadly.
Despite of the fact that the USA are [l. poje] the richest country on the world and in spite of [cos tu brakuje]government's allocatION OF a lot of money onTO prevent natural disasterS, it several hundred Americans die in the natural catastrophes every year . So let’s look[examine...lepiej] at the nature of United States from a slightly different perspective.

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Which of mentioned disasters can be prevented?

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