Drinking-a problem for children.(Sprawdzenie)

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Hey,
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Jeśli ktoś by mógł sprawdzić moje błędy byłabym bardzo wdzięczna.
Z góry dziękuje ;)

John is 12 years old. He and his family immigrated to the USA. Before the immigration John was a friendly and full of energy child. He had many friends and he was spending a lot of time with them. Everybody liked him. New country means new language, new friends and new school. Everything has changed. That was an unusual experience to him.
John thought that he had to face all the new difficulties. He was always solving problems and he didn't thought that this time would be different but it's was really hard to him. After moving to the USA John was very sad. He hadn't friends and it was the reason to start drinking alcohol. His parents were worried about him, because he stopped talking with them. He was stealing money from his parents and he was buying alcohol for it. The alcohol wasn't enough for him so he started taking drugs. The teachers noticed that something is wrong with him. He was always looking through the window and he was thinking about something different. He wanted to sleep in lessons and couldn't concentrate. During a lesson a teacher asked him whats wrong and he didn't wanted to answer. One day John met a girl and she wanted to save him from the terrible situation in which he was. He told her everything and she decided to help him. He stopped drinking alcohol and taking drugs. He started to learn and found new friends.
"Story about 'John(12) who have' (a z ktorej to ksiazki zle przepisalas - propsze poprawic!!!) problems with alcohol."

He and his family 'immigrated' (zle slowo) to the USA. Before 'the' (niepotrz) 'immigration' (zle slowo i do tego zla czesc zdania) John was a friendly and full of energy child. He had many friends and 'he was spending' (a dlaczego nie simplew SPENT?) a lot of time with them.
That was an unusual experience 'to' FOR-dla) him.
He was always solving problems and he didn't 'thought' (tutaj potrzeba czasownika a nie rzeczownika - czy juz nie rozpoznajesz czesci zdania?- czas przeszly) that this time would be different but 'it's' (to co napisalas to IT IS - popatz teraz czy to ma sens- nie - IT )was really hard 'to' FOR him.
He 'hadn't' (ok ale ja lubie DID NOT HAVE) ANY friends and 'it' THAT was the reason 'to start' FOR STARTING TO 'drinking' DRINK alcohol.
The teachers noticed that something 'is' WAS wrong with him. He was always looking through the window and he was thinking about something 'different' (tutaj chyba mialas na mysli ELSE). He wanted to sleep in THE lessons and couldn't concentrate. During a lesson a teacher asked him "what's wrong" and he
didn't 'wanted' WANT to answer. One day John met a girl and she wanted to
save him from the terrible situation in which 'he was' (mozna inaczej...in which HE FOUND HIMSELF IN.

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