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Universities in Poland have been struggling with financial problems. Some people suggest introducing fees for university students. What is your opinion?

In my opinion fees for university students should not be introduced. Firstly, universities in Poland ought to consider finding different solutions to financial problems they face with for instance ask for help European Union. What is more, the government should realize that most of students cannot afford on a living in a big city not mention paying for studying. Another reason why fees are not a good idea is the fact that not everyone among parents earn enough money to send their offspring to school and it would be unfair not giving people like these a chance for an education and better living. Last but not least, it is good to remember that there is a possibility that uneducated people will be able to work in their professions without insufficient knowledge and experience only for some sums of money. Taking all facts into consideration, I believe that there should not be fees for university students and every student has to have a right to get an education no matter how rich he or she is.

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In my opinion fees for university students should not be introduced.
Firstly, universities in Poland ought to consider finding different
solutions to financial problems 'they face with' (tutaj ...they ARE faced with) for instance askING for help (a gdzie jest FROM? THE European Union. What is more, the government should realize that most of (cos tutaj brakuje - pomysl co)students cannot afford (cos tutaj brakuje) on 'a' (nie rozumiem co to 'a' tutaj robi) living in a big city not (tu cos brakuje) mention paying for studying. Another reason why fees are not a good idea is the fact that not 'everyone among' (lepiej napisz ALL) parents earn enough money to send their offspring to 'school' (tutaj Uni) and it would be unfair not giving 'people like these' (tutaj nie wiem czy dalej mowisz o rodzicach czy o studentach - nie jest to jasne) a chance for an education and better living. Last (przecinek przed but) but not least, it is good to remember that there is a possibility that
'uneducated' (to jest bardzo zle okreslenie, bo nawet ktos po podstawowce jest 'educated' do pewnego stopnia) people will be able to work in their professions without 'insufficient knowledge and experience' (to nie jest za trafne okreslenie) only for 'some sums of money' (tutaj nie tak..napisz for a 'set' sum of money....to ostatnie zdanie nie jest za najlepsze).
Taking all facts into consideration, I believe that there should not
be fees for university students and every student 'has to have a right' (nie pisz tak, bo nie mozemy powiedziec, ze studenci w Polsce maja prawo, a studenci w np. Indii, czy Pakistanie nie maja tego prawa) to get an education no matter how rich he or she is. (a jeszcze dochodzi do tego FAKT, ze nie wszyscy nadaja sie do studiowania, bo np, nie maja odpowiednich wynikow ze szkol)

Say about some of the hardships young people have to face as they enter the adult life, and measures that might be taken to help them overcome these hardships.

The process of entering into adult life can be very difficult for youngsters. During this period of time young people are forced to overcome many obstacles. First of all, they have to realize that adulthood is associated with financial independence. Saving money not only spending it becomes important. What is more, young people have to take responsibility for everything they do. Furthermore, it is time of rebellion. Youngsters are against entire world especially against parents and their will. They can be rude, cruel and wayward. Adulthood is also a time of first serious relationships. Last but not least, people who enter the adult life may have problems with accepting their appearance and with perception of the world.
It is hard to say what steps should be made to help young people with overcoming obstacles. From my point the view, parents can make this process easier by supporting their offspring and be understanding for them.

During this period 'of time' (niepotr) young people are forced to
overcome many obstacles.
Furthermore, it is (przedimek) time of rebellion. Youngsters are against (przedimek) entire world especially against (cos tu brakuje moze THEIR?)parents and their 'will' (moze lepiej willpower). 'They' 9tutaj nie jest wyrazne kto jest 'rude' czy parents' czy 'youngsters') can be rude, cruel and wayward. s. Last but not least, people who enter 'the' (niepotr) adult life may have problems with accepting their appearance and with (dalabym 'a') perception of the world.
It is hard to say what steps should be made to help young people with
overcoming (tu cos brakuje moze THESE) obstacles. From my point 'the' (zle slowo, tutaj OF) view, parents can make this process easier by supporting their offspring and be understanding for them.

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