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Bardzo bym prosiła o sprawdzenie mojej rozprawki pod kątem językowym, ale też pod względem tego, jak rozprawka ma wyglądać schematycznie (for and against essay).
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These days more and more people are deciding to go on a tough, lonely journey.. Let us consider the advantages and disadvantages of this idea.
To begin with, traveling alone makes the travellers independant. They are allowed to plan a programme of a voyage according to their likes and as a result, they spend time as they want.
Secondly, this is a good way to become more courageous. While a unaccompanied(alone) journey there is a lot of threaten situations such as confrontation with a wild animal.. After that, a human perceives oneself as a strong person. Last, but not least is fact that lonely tours let traveller distance from the daily life. While the dangerous adventures people aprreciate life and therefore everyday problems do not have such a huge meaning.
However, opoonents claim that campanionless(alone) touring is more expensive that traveling with partner. The costs such as the fuel or the rental of a room are lower when there is a possibility to divide it. Moreover, spending time oneself while the journey involves boredom. There is nobody with who a traveller is able to talk, do the incredible activities or share happiness of the traveling.
Finally, lonely tours are threatening. In many situations a traveler is in need but there is no one who could aid. Lack of help sometimes leads to death.
To sum up, traveling alone has as many advantages as negative aspects. In my opinion, altough this kind of journey is risky , everyone should try to have a rest from everyday affairs.