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Welcome, everyone !
i am just writting to share you my news !
In last week , i was taking party in the ,, WWF rainforest rescue " .
The special event was created by the WWF organisation which invited a few botanists , including me , from ,, KEW gardens" to resarch on drought in the jungle .
that event was very important for me therefore i wonted to participate in such fantastic action for me and additionaly i would developed my ability of botanics and ecology .
when i was at the event in the national Park yasuni , we did a lot of explored and experiments an drough in equatorial climate then turned out that we discovered a lot of cause which usually were because of human activity , and what is more i discovered a very rare edangered of the species tillandsia therefore i felt pleased then i secured his and took with me to the KEW in order to propagation . After a month we returned to London .
in my view, everything was very well organised and i will never forget that adventure ! i gained huge experience and i met many friends form Equador and other country .
Certainly i can recommend everyone to take party in charity events , especially , if you want to expand your passion.
Lastly , what are your opinions , suggestes about it ? do you have any other stories related to charity or volunteering ?
if it no problem for you , i loking forward to hearing from you !
See you soon !