Mam szansę z taką recenzją? :)

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HAIR - THE MUSICAL
I'd heard many opinions about this movie before I saw it myself. Only then I could understand what kind of movie it really was.
The plot begins when Claude Bukowski comes to New York. He meets a group of crazy, long-haired and colorful hippies who try to convince him that he shouldn't take part in Vietnam war as he is going to. They show him a real life. Their life. Dreamy, colorful and mystical. But also very difficult and cruel because hardly ever someone understands and respects it. Claude feels confused. He cannot reach an agreement with himself... Is there any point in staying with these freaks celebrating peace and free love? Or maybe he should be a responsible man and go to army?
HAIR brings all the answers. We can realise what is wrong and what is right. It tells us a beautiful story from those unique times. We can feel their pain, think about their problems.
I don't know anybody who wouldn't admire the unmemorable soundtrack of the Milos Forman's movie. The director created a real masterpiece.
HAIR made me laugh and cry. I've seen it so many times, that I don't exactly remember. I know almost all the lyrics by heart. Treat Williams, Donnie Dacus and others gave the movie a specyfic atmosphere that makes the viewer feel like one of them. One of the people being the part of the history that won't take place anymore.

Z góry dzięki :D
Ps. Jakby co - nie boję się słów krytyki. Mówcie śmiało!

Only then I could understand what kind of movie it really was.
INWERSJA!

he shouldn't take part in THE Vietnam war as he is going to.
-as- znaczy, że nie wybiera się do Wietnamu. Npiasz ', which' albo lepiej 'though... there'

They show him real life. Their life. THEIR LIFE IS Dreamy, colorful and mystical.przecinek But also very difficult and cruel because hardly ANYone He cannot COME TO TERMS with himself...
and JOIN THE army?

We can feel their CZYJ? TIMESÓW?) pain, think about their problems.

I don't know anybody who DOES/DID NOT (wouldn't można by użyć, mówiąc o ludziach, którzy niewidzieli tego filmu!)

the Milos Forman's movie. ALBO THE ALBO 'S

I've seen it so many times, that I don't exactly remember.
Widziałem film tyle razy, że nie pamiętam dokładnie :-)
filmu?
I've lost count of the number of times I've seen it.


specyfic ortograf, poza tym to slowo = konkretny
a special atmosphere


One of the people being the part of the history that won't take place anymore.
brak osobowej formy czasownika w zdaniu glownym
'historia, ktora sie juz nie odbedzie'?

Calosc na pewno przekracza poziom FCE pod wzgledem stuktury tekstu. Do CAE może brakuje trochę bardziej wyszukanego slownictwa. Bledy nie wplywaja na ogolny odbior tekstu jako dobrze napisanego.
Ocena na maturze zalezy od dlugosci wlosow oceniajacego :-)

Możesz poprawić swoje szanse zamieniając unmemorable na memorable albo unf....

Dzięki :D Mam nadzieję, że długość włosów oceniającego będzie imponująca! :)