Help me ! (wystarczy tylko sprawdzić krótki list)

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Dear Megan,
Thanks for your letter. I’ve got so much to tell you that I don’t know how to begin.
I can’t wait for summer. I’m planning different activities but in the first week of holidays I will sleep (it sounds strange but it is my way for a rest). Then I will go on camp for about 2 weeks. As usually as in every year when I go on camp I’m having a good time. There are a lot of interesting things to do, for example parties! In the middle of July I’ll come back home and I’ll spend there rest of my time.
To be honest, I’m a bit afraid of it. Certainly you’re thinking what I’ll do with earned mon-ey. I’ll spend it on the learning of the electric guitar playing. I always dream about it.
You asked about this girl from Spain. I intend to visit her during holidays. You think ’How it is possible?’ I will answer this question for you. She’s going to her relatives and she invited me to herself.
Anyway, that’s enough about me. What are your plans for the summer? Please write and tell me.
Best wishes
Chloe
Dość długo nie miałam kontaktu z angielskim, ale spróbuje co nieco poprawić...

Dear Megan,
Thanks for your letter. I’ve got so much to tell you that I don’t know how where to begin.
I can’t wait for summer. I’m planning different various activities but (however?? nie jestem pewna) in the first week of holidays I will spend sleeping (it sounds strange but it is my way for a rest). Then I will go on to camp for about 2 weeks. As usually as in every year (tutaj chyba trzeba zmienić szyk... Every year, as usual, when.. itd.) when I go on to camp I’m having a good time. There are a lot of interesting things to do, for example parties (partying?) ! In the middle of July I’ll come back home and I’ll spend there rest of my time.
To be honest, I’m a bit afraid of it. Certainly you’re thinking wondering what I’ll do with earned mon-ey. I’ll spend it on the learning of the electric guitar playing electric guitar lessons. I always dream (I've always dreamt of it) about it.
You asked about this girl from Spain. I intend to visit her during holidays. You think ’How is it possible?’ I will answer this question for you )może po prostu Let me answer. ??) . She’s going (tutaj bardziej pasuje She's visiting her relatives) to her relatives and she invited me to herself.
Anyway, that’s enough about me (That's all from me. czy jakoś tak..). What are your plans for the summer? Please write and tell me.
Best wishes
Chloe
Widać, że dawno nie mialaś kontaktu z angielskim ... Bo to jest na 100 % źle poprawione, sama dostrzegam błędy.
shapelessness - masz racje. Nie bierz pod uwage wszystkich poprawek, ale i tak sa inne bledy.
Terri - możesz mi to poprawić ? ? to mi jest bardzo potrzebne i strasznie mi na tym zależy
juz poprawilam w innym poscie.
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