Mile słowa - prosze o sprawdzenie.

Hi my Darling.
When I get yours letter you carry out my heart more. Each of your letters
have never let me down. I was honest in my last letter and you should know
of that I spilt up with my last girlfreind one year ago. She cheated me on.
She has written me a lot badly things but I try to stay out of her. So I
decided on to talk with you. I would like to drop in anywhere place in the world you
want, but it must be stay out town. I will care of you. I do everything
what you want. I will call my duties off to meet with you. I wish cuddle up
to you and give you a kisses.

Yours new friend Mark:)

When I get 'yours' (to jesdt zle slowo, poczytaj o roznicy pomiedzy YOUR a YOURS) letter you 'carry out my heart more' (tego nie rozumiem) .
Each of your letters - lepiej EVERY ONE of...
I was honest in my last letter and you should know 'of' (nie rozumiem uzycia 'of' tutaj) that I 'spilt' (napewno nie, masz zle slowo) up with my last girlfreind one year ago. She cheated 'me on' (zla kolejnosc slow).
She 'has written me' WROTE a lot (brakuje slowa) 'badly' (zla czesc mowy) things but I try to stay 'out of her' (ciekawe- ale niestety zle). So I decided 'on' (nie rozumiem uzycia tego slowa tutaj) to talk with you. I would like to drop in 'anywhere' (zle slowo) place in the world you
want, but it must be 'stay' (nie rozumiem tego) out (tu brakuje slowa)town. I will (tu brkuje slowa)care of you. I (tu brakuje slowa) do everything 'what' (zle slowo, kalka z polskiego) you want. I will 'call my duties' (nie rozumiem) off to meet with you. I wish (brakuje slowa) cuddle up
to you and give you 'a' (dlaczego uzywasz 'a' przed l. mn?) kisses.

Yours new friend Mark:)[/quote]