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It was early November morning. I could hear the wind howling around me when I was waiting for the bus. It was quite dark so I scared when suddenly Judy talked something to me. She moved to my city two days before.
Judy is in her mid-thirties but she looks like a teenager. Many men are shocked by her appearance. She is a slim and a tall blonde with brown eyes and a sexy mole above her mouth. Judy’s got lovely natural curls and a great suntan. She always is an attractive and well-kept – not many young women today wear feminine clothes such as skirts and blouses.
As for her personality, she is motivated and hard- working. It’s her ambitious to become an actress. Moreover, she is very loyal to her friends. However, she tends to be stubborn and self- confident. She sometimes too frank expresses her opinions.
Judy always is busy. She has many friends and spends a lot of time with them. In connection with her interests she often goes to exhibitions about movie and songs. Judy goes to a gym and aerobic, too.
On the whole, Judy is a fantastic woman who always shows a great deal of spirit. I know that she always gives me advice because her head is full of ideas.