Proszę o sprawdzenie listów +5 zdań

Witam wszystkich czy mogli byście mi pomóc i sprawdzić listy jeden z zażaleniem i pocztówkę i pięć zdań.

1.Zatrzymałem się w pensjonacie,widoki są piękne,a okna wychodzą na jezioro.
I stayed in the pension , the views are beautiful and the windows overlook the lake.

2.Czy może mi pan powiedzieć, czy śniadanie jest wliczone w cenę i czy każdy pokój jest z łazienką?
Could you to tell me if breakfast is included and each room is en suite ?

3.Proszę bilet powrotny do Paryża z miejscówką w wagonie dla niepalących, a czy są zniżki dla studentów?
I would like a return ticket to Paris in non-smoking compartment, and if there are discounts for students?

4.Spóźniłem się na zajęcie ponieważ złapałem gumę,potem prawie zabrakło mi benzyny a później kierowca przede mną zahamował tak niespodziewanie, że uderzyłem w tył jego auta .
I missed the classes because I caught a flat tire, then almost run out of petrol, and then the driver in front of me braked so suddenly i drove into the back of his car.

5.Chciałbym wymienić ten sweter na inny ponieważ ten jest zbyt obcisły.Jeśli to niemożliwe , chciałbym go zwrócić i poprosić o zwrot pieniędzy.
I would like to exchange this sweater to another because this is to tight.If is not possible, I would return it and ask for a refund.

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Niedawno zamówiłeś książkę w języku angielskim w sklepie internetowym.Niestety ani zamówiony produkt,ani termin dostawy nie spełnił twoich oczekiwań.Napisz list do sprzedawcy
*Określ cel listu i podaj szczegóły transakcji
*Podaj dwa powody, dla których zamówiona książka nie spełniła twoich oczekiwań.
*Zwróć uwagę na zbyt późny termin dostarczenia ci produktu i napisz jaki był tego skutek
*Określ, czego oczekujesz od sprzedawcy, i wyraź nadzieje na pomyślne rozpatrzenie reklamacji.
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the book which i bought in your Internet shop.I order it in your internet shop three weeks ago but I receive it three days ago it was 23th May. When I ordered it 2nd May you told me it will come in week but it did not happen.
I was going to gave this book to my cousin on his birthday,because the book did not come on the time I had to buy him something else
Moreover there are two problems with the book.
First, it had two deep cracks on the front. Second, there was missing several pages.
I hope this disappointment entitles me to compensation I want to fully refund.
I am waiting for positive answer in my case.I hope to hear from you soon..

Yours faithfully
XYZ

Pocztówka
Przebywasz w jednym z krajów anglojęzycznych.Napisz pocztówkę do kolegi/koleżanki z za granicy.
*Napisz, gdzie przebywasz na wakacjach
*Napisz co ciekawego udało ci się zobaczyć/zwiedzić
*Poinformuj jakie masz plany na najbliższe dni
*Wyraź żal że twój kolega/koleżanka nie jest razem z wami
Hi Mike
I'm in Kumamoto in southern Japan .Weater is very good sunny and hot.
I'm having a really nice holidays.
Near the city is airfield and there was airshow there were many fantastic airplanes.
Over the next few days I will go on the beach and I will tour the city.
I'm sorry that you're not here with us.

Take care
XYZ

Z góry dziękuje za pomoc.

No nikt nie pomoże??

1.Zatrzymałem się w pensjonacie,widoki są piękne,a okna wychodzą na jezioro.
I stayed in the 'pension' (poszukaj inne slowo, po ang. 'pension' znaczy 'emerytura') , the views are beautiful and the windows overlook the lake.
2.Could you to tell me if breakfast is included and IF each room is en suite ?
3.I would like a return ticket to Paris in (brak przedimka) non-smoking compartment, and PLEASE TELL ME if there are discounts for students?
4.I 'missed' (to nie znaczy 'soznienie-poszukaj odpowiedniego slowa) the classes because I caught a flat 'tire' (tyre BrE), then I almost 'run' (zle) out of petrol, and then the driver in front of me braked so suddenly THAT 'i' (co to ma byc? popraw) drove into the back of his car.
5.I would like to exchange this sweater 'to' FOR another ONE because this is to tight.If IT is not possible, I would LIKE TO return it and ask for a refund.

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the book which 'i' (czy naprawde mam byc niegrzeczna? Kto Ciebie uczyl ze to slowo piszemy w ten sposob?) bought in your Internet shop.I 'order' (tutaj czas przeszly) it in your internet shop three weeks ago but I 'receive' (zly czas tutaj czas przeszly) it ONLY three days ago 'it was' (inaczej ON THE) 23th May (a roku? mamy zgadywac?). When I ordered it ON THE 2nd May you told me THAT it will come in (a gdzie przedimek?) week but 'it' THAT did not happen.
I was going to 'gave' (zly czas) this book to my cousin on his birthday, because the book did not come on the time I had to buy him something else
First, it had two deep cracks on the front COVER. Second, there IT was missing several pages.
I hope this disappointment entitles me to compensation 'I want to fully refund' (cos tu nie tak, pomysl).
I am waiting for (a gdzie przedimek?) positive answer in my case.

I'm in Kumamoto in southern Japan . (a gdzie przedimek?) 'Weater' (ortog) is 'very good sunny' (cos tu nie tak) and hot.
I'm having 'a' (nie, bo albo piszesz to 'a' i masz l. poj w holiday, albo bez 'a' i 'holidays - dlaczego NIKT was nie uczy roznicy pomiedzy l. poj a mnoga?) really nice holidays.
Near the city is (a gdzie przedimek? poszedl sobie na spacerek) airfield and there was (przedimek) airshow. There were many fantastic airplanes.

Co z tymi przedimkami?

Wielkie dzięki za pomoc z tymi przyimkami to po prostu zapominam i takie głupoty wychodzą, teraz powinno być dobrze (mam nadzieje)

1. I stayed in the guest-house , the views are beautiful and the windows overlook the lake

2. Could you to tell me if breakfast is included and If each room is en suite ?

3.I would like a return ticket to Paris in a non-smoking compartment, and please tell me if there are discounts for students?

4.I late on the classes because I caught a flat tyre, then almost ran out of petrol, and then the driver in front of me braked so suddenly that drove into the back of his car.

5.I would like to exchange this sweater for another one because this is to tight.If it is not possible, I would like to return it and ask for a refund


Zad.1
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the book i bought in your Internet shop.I ordered it in your internet shop three weeks ago but I received it only three days ago it was 23th May 2010 . When I ordered it on the 2nd May you told me that it will come in a week but that did not happen.
I was going to give this book to my cousin on his birthday,because the book did not come on the time I had to buy him something else
Moreover there are two problems with the book.
First, it had two deep cracks on the front cover. Second, there it was missing several pages.
I hope this disappointment entitles me to a refund.
I am waiting for a positive answer in my case.I hope to hear from you soon..

Yours faithfully
XYZ

Zad 2
Hi Mike
I'm in Kumamoto in southern Japan .The weather is very good, sunny and warm
I'm having really nice holidays.
Near the city is the airfield and there was the airshow there were many fantastic airplanes.
Over the next few days I will go on the beach and I will tour the city.
I'm sorry that you're not here with us.

Take care
XYZ

ps. a czy opisanie *Wyraź żal że twój kolega/koleżanka nie jest razem z wami.
Może być takie jak jest czyli :I'm sorry that you're not here with us. ??

>>>>>z tymi przyimkami to po prostu zapominam i takie głupoty wychodzą... jak masz 80 lat to Ci wybacze, moze juz pamiec nie jest tala jak byla, jak mniej, to wez sie do roboty i pokonaj te przedimki.
2. Could you to tell me if breakfast is included and 'If' (mala litera ) each room is en suite ?
4. 'I late' (co to niby ma znaczyc 'on' (to jest kalka z jez. polskiego - nie rob tego, popatrz na wzory zdan w jez ang) the classes because..

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the book 'i' (a dlaczego nie umiesz czytac po polsku? Czy po prostu moje wskazowki olewasz....jak tak, to nie bede swojego czasu na to tracila.

Nie olewam twoich wskazówek, jestem ci za nie bardzo wdzięczny tylko .... może jestem oporny w nauce..

I have been late on classes because.....
........ my dissatisfaction with the book which bought in your....

ps.
proszę się tak nie złościć (całe życie się uczymy).