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Temat: What are the effects of divorces in modern countries?

Nowadays, the number of divorces in modern countries have increased rapidly. The different causes of such situation could be mentioned endlessly from financial problems to diversity of personality. Nevertheless the crucial problems that should be underlined are effects revolting from those divorces.
Insecure economic situation could be considered as one of the effects. At marriage one can always count on spouse’s help. In case of unemployment the risk of being left alone with problems disappears because you can be sure of immediate support from the closest person. While after divorce the economic situation gets worsen due to the fact that one only depend on oneself.
Also a religious matter started to change as an effect of divorces. The basics is the belief to find your second half and grow old together. As the words of marriage oath suggest to overcome the sickness, troubles and misunderstanding. But once a divorce was done one is wondering about the strength and deep meaning of these words. Probably starting to doubt whether it is possible to love and bound with only one person for the whole life.
But the most dangerous effect of divorce considers the psychological sphere. People tend to get married with a feeling of complete devotion for another person. Moreover they often underline the fact of knowing each other inside out. So when one suddenly gets rejected by the person who they have trusted the most, the consequences could be devastating. Depression, the loss of oneself value and the feeling of loneliness could accompany a divorcee for the rest of the life.
In conclusion, all problems mentioned above carry a great deal of guilt, regret or even anger. So the unsolved matter remains whether have second thoughts about taking a divorce or getting married in the first place.

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