Essay -Internet chatrooms-

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Essay question: Internet chatrooms do not serve a useful purpose. Write an essay giving arguments for and against this statement and also state your own opinion.

Is it true, that Internet chatrooms do not serve a useful purpose? Let us chat about it! It is well-known, that nowadays a predominant part of population uses chatrooms and has fun going online. But the significant question is - is it safe?
To begin with, the alarming amount of people has the Internet access. It is pretty important, but not all of them should use it. For instance, how do we know, who is sitting at the other end of a line? It is very easy to cheat and be cheated. Talking about young people - lots of children chat with strangers and parents do not control them. Why is it so important to keep a kid safe? The Internet is full of pornography, transvestism and violence, which have terrible influences on the young ones.
On the other hand, people find advantages of using Internet chatrooms. They are important mostly for separated couples, friends or families, whose members are apart in different countries - from the reason they want to stay in touch. What is more, by the chatrooms people can send important information, lectures, recordings, quotations, letters and so. But beware of “fake - cheaters”. They will try to get one’s address or phone number…
In my opinion, Internet chatrooms carry in more defects than advantages and should be banned quickly. Modern life bereaves us from reading books and meetings with friends in real life... We should take care of not forgetting that we are not machines.
bez przecinkow przed that
the population
amount do niepoliczalnych
an alarmingly high number...have Internet access
a terrible influence
nie 'apart' ale 'away'
from the reason zle
using chatrooms people... - naprawdę chartroomy do tego sluza?
fake-cheaters - falszywi oszukancy? Tzn. oni mowia prawde?
carry in - wnosic, np. cos do pokoju
dwa ostatnia zdania ze zlymi czasownikami
racja, miało być chateers a nie cheaters, z resztą dam radę. dziękuję :)
chaters*
próbbuj dallej :-)

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