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A MANAGEMENT TRAINING COURSE

The aim of this report is to present the advantages of a management training course and to proove that it is a good idea for personal developpment.
This course offers a large possibility to improve one's communication skills which is crutial to my current position in our company. Being staff manager includes dealing with people. Taking part in a course where there are not many people in a group is the most efficient way of learning and working.I prefer September because in July we start a new project which may involve a large amount of work. I will be given free notes which may come in handy for the rest of our team. It will be a good idea to book it now because it will give us 5 % reduction.
To sum up, it seems to be worth taking part in.


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Pomoże ktoś??

The aim of this report is to present the advantages of a management training course and to 'proove' (ortog i ja bym uzyla inne slowo) that it is 'a good idea' (napisalabym to inaczej...of benefit) for personal developpment.
This course offers a 'large' (daj tutaj inne slowo) possibility to improve one's communication skills which 'is' (ale to ma sie zgadzac z 'skills'-l. mn) 'crutial' (ortog) to 'my' (nie mozesz mowic 'one's a pozniej 'my') current position in 'our' (napisz 'the') company. 'Being staff manager' (napisz to inaczej...The position of staff manager) includes dealing with people. Taking part in a course where there are not many people in a group is the most efficient way of learning (ale czego?) and working . I WOULD prefer September because in July we (cos tu brak) start a new project which may involve a large amount of work. I will be given free 'notes' (dsaj inne slowo) which may 'come in handy' (nie, napisz to formalniej) for the rest of 'our' (the) team. 'It will be a good idea to book it now' (nie, napisz Early booking entitles us ...) because it will give us 5 % reduction.
'To sum up' (nie lubie tego tutaj), 'it' (napisz o co chodzi- the course) seems to be worth taking part in.

Dziękuję bardzo za wskazówki! :)