Wywiad z rodzicem. Krotki test. Prosze o sprawdzenie.

-Do you think that his physical skills are well-developed?

-In my opinion his gross motor skills are really well-developed. He loves gross motor activities rather than fine motor ones. Accordingly his fine motor skills are not developed as well as they should. Therefore we are trying to improve them by carrying out more fine motor activities such as drawing or painting

Czy to brzmi dobrze? Mam watpliwosci, co do 2 ostatnich zdan. Jakby mozna bylo inaczej ujac, ze male umiejetnosci badanego dziecka (fine motor skills) nie sa odpowiednio rozwiniete, tak jak duze i to jest spowodowane tym, ze lubi "gross motor activities". Dlatego tez rodzice probuja stale je ulepszac.

moim zdaniem ok, a jestem tłumaczem tekstów medycznych.

Ok, I admit I'm a nitpicker... :)

In my opinion, his gross motor skills are really well developed. He loves[tutaj wstawilabym "prefers"] gross motor activities to rather than fine motor ones. Accordingly, his fine motor skills are not developed as well as they should [be]. Therefore, we are trying to improve them by carrying out [moze encouraging him to participate in..] more fine motor activities such as drawing or painting

Dziekuje bardzo za pomoc :)

it is a question of what kind of errors can pass 'unnoticed' :-)