Proszę o sprawdzenie części CV

A self-motivated and hard working person with experience in all aspects
of warehouse and production work. Able to use own initiative and work as part of a team. Proven teamwork skills, including working effectively with others and utilizing problem solving skills to achieve team objective. Eager to learn and implement new skills and transfer existing skills. Cultural and polite during the work as well as outside it. Good level of fitness; experience of heavy, lifting, carrying, etc.

Proven teamwork skills, including working effectively with others and utilizing problem solving skills to achieve team objectiveS.
Cultural and polite during 'the work' (napisz 'working hours') as well as 'outside it' ('outside of work). Good level of fitness; experience of heavy, lifting, carrying, 'etc' (nie dawaj tego 'etc' bo to nic nie znaczy, kazdy moze rozumiec cos innego) .