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Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to you in a job babysitting at a camp in Wales which I saw on the Internet. I am very interested in this work.
I'm studying pedagogy, dietetics and take care of young children.
I love spending time with children and traveling. I am interested in extreme sports, music, cooking and psychology.
I completed a course in first aid, in English and German and finished the practice in the nursery.
I think that I am a good candidate for this job, because I'm patient, I establish contact with childrens easily and I think I`m very friendly. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require further information. I would be glad attend an interview at any time convenient you.

Yours faithfully

Agnes
writing to you in a job babysitting at a camp in Wales > niezrozumiałe
finished the practice in the nursery > ?
childrens > a to jest mnoga od czego? od children?...
would be glad attend > czegoś tu brakuje
at any time convenient you > tak nie
Agnes > imion się nie tłumaczy raczej
I'm studying pedagogy, dietetics and take care of young children. /nie ta forma. Poza tym mozesz zastapic caly zwrot 'take care of young children' dwoma slowami.

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