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Nowadays, we often can meet a lot of homeless on the street. They are standing and begging us for mercy. These people haven't got a house or money for food. Many people all over the world give money for them but in my opinion we coudn't do it.


Firstly, most of the beggars on the roads are usually drug addicts, alcholics, gamblers . If you donate some cash for them they waste it on a inessentials..
Homeless said that they need money for food or family but half of them are not doing anything good with the money.

Secondly, It makes them lazy and become irresponsible Certain homeless don't even try to work and earn because they know that they can get money without any efforts.

Thirdly, in Poland works many social organisations, which help poor people. For instance Caritas. If somebody is really needed, can go and surerly gettng a hepl as clothes, hot meals or medicines.

To conclude, we shouldn,t give money direct to people on the street and rather for a organisations, which are handling outreach program. We think thata homeless don't make ends meet but we usually are someone who's been taken for a ride by them.

Np.'needed' zle slowo . nie ozn . on ' bycia w potrzebie' music być forma ..' to be in need';) , ' organizations' - l.mn. wiec nie ' works' , sporo też literowek tu i ówdzie . ' a help' >> ' Some help "

Nowadays, we 'often can' (zla kol slow) meet a lot of homeless (kogo? czego? dogs? cats?) on the street. They are standing and begging us 'for mercy' (zla konotacja) .
Many people all over the world give money for them but in my opinion we 'coudn't' (to jest calkowicie zle slowo, mialas na mysli, niepowinnismy - we should not) do it.

Firstly, most of the beggars on the 'roads' (tutaj streets) are usually drug addicts, 'alcholics' (ortog), gamblers . If you donate some cash 'for' (zle slowo) them they waste it on a 'inessentials.' (zle slowo).
Homeless 'said' (zly czas) that they need money for food or (tu cos brak) family but half of them are not doing anything good with the money.

Secondly, It makes them lazy and (cos brak) become irresponsible Certain homeless (daj slowo tutaj) don't even try to work and earn because they know that they can get money without any efforts.

Thirdly, in Poland ('works' (zle slowo) many social organisations) (zla kol slow), which help poor people.
If somebody is really 'needed,' (zle slowo) (tu potrzeba kto) can go and 'surerly' (bardzo amerikanizm) 'gettng' (ortog ale i tak zle slowo) 'a' (niepotr) 'hepl' (ortog) (brak slowa) clothes, hot meals or medicines.

To conclude, we 'shouldn,t' (ortog, slowo jest should not, shouldn't) give money 'direct' (zla czesc mowy) to people on the street and rather (brak 2/3 slowa) for 'a' (przed l. mn nie dajemy 'a') organisations, which 'are handling' (handle) (tutaj daj 'a', jak masz na mysli jeden program, ale jak wiecej, to l. mn w programmeS) outreach program. We think that a homeless (brak slowa) don't make ends meet but we 'usually are' (zla kol slow) someone who's been taken for a ride by them.

Nowadays, we can often meet a lot of homeless people on the street. They are standing and begging us for compassion (?)
Many people all over the world give money for them but in my opinion we should not do it.

Firstly, most of the beggars on the streets are usually drug addicts, alholics ,, gamblers . If you donate some cash to them they waste it on a unnecessary things.
Homeless say that they need money for food or their family but half of them are not doing anything good with the money.

Secondly, It makes them lazy and they become irresponsible Certain homeless people don't even try to work and earn because they know that they can get money without any efforts.

Thirdly, in Poland we have many social organisations) (zla kol slow..nie wiem...organisations social ?), which help poor people.
If somebody is really in need he can go and for certain receive some help like clothes, hot meals or medicines.

To conclude, we shouldn't give money directly to people on the street and rather (brak 2/3 slowa..nie wiem..) for organisations, which handle outreach programmes. We think that a homeless people don't make ends meet but we are usually someone who's been taken for a ride by them.

Nowadays, we can often meet a lot of homeless people on the street. They are standing and begging us for compassion (?) (mozna tez ..money and pity).


Certain homeless people don't even try to work and earn because they know that they can get money without any 'efforts' EFFORT.

Thirdly, in Poland we have many social organisations (ok), which help poor people.

To conclude, we shouldn't give money directly to people on the street and rather (tutaj mozna dac...show support for, support the) organisations, which handle outreach programmes. We think that 'a' (niepotr) homeless people don't make ends meet ...