Bikes

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Using public bikes in cities has many advantages. First of all, owing to the means of transport people avoid waiting in long traffic jams. Therefore, they reach their destination quickly, save time and nerves. What is more, the city builds special paths and roads, near pavements, only for cyclists, in order to make commuting safe either for pedestrians as the people using bikes. Second of all, people who drive the vehicles take care of environment. Bikes are eco-friendly means of transport and do not emit any pollution to the atmosphere. Third of all, using bikes improves people’s health. While doing the activity people not only train muscles of whole body, but especially these of the lower parts of . Therefore, it is easier for the humans to keep fit and be in a satisfying for them condition. Moreover, owing to the commuting by bikes, people supply their organisms, especially heart and brain, with certain amounts of oxygen. Thus, they increase their effectiveness at work, feel more relaxed than these who use workers who use public transport, such as trains, buses or these who use cars. What is more, workers who get to work by bikes are relaxed, unstressed, think more logically, became creative and have new, great ideas, for example to provide certain activities to increase the sales. In conclusion, commuting by bikes in large important towns has many pluses.

First of all, owing to 'the means of transport' (trego calkowicie nie rozumiem - cos tu nie tak) people avoid waiting in long traffic jams. Therefore, they reach their destination quickly, 'save' (pomysl - cos tu nie tak) time and nerves. What is more, the city builds special paths and roads, near (przedimek) pavements, only for (przedimek) cyclists, in order to make commuting safe 'either' (zle slowo) for pedestrians as 'the people using bikes' (jest inne okreslenie - bike riders). 'Second of all' (tego nie za bardzo lubie - to jest za bardzo polskie - lepiej Secondly), people who drive 'the' (niepotr) vehicles take care of environment- (Co? chyba sie pomysliles, bo ci co kieruja samochodami nie za bardzo dbaja o environment). Bikes are (przedimek) eco-friendly means of transport and do not emit any pollution to the atmosphere. 'Third of all' (Thirdly) using bikes improves people’s health. While doing 'the' (no jakie activity? jak juz piszesz 'the' to musisz napisac jakie) activity people not only train muscles of (przedimek) whole body, but especially 'these' (zle slowo) of the lower parts of (ale czego?). Therefore, it is easier for the humans to keep fit and be in a satisfying 'for them condition' (zla kol slow).
Thus, they increase their effectiveness at work, feel more relaxed than 'these' (zle slowo) 'who use workers' (niepotr) who use public transport, such as trains, buses or 'these' (zle slowo) who use cars. What is more, workers who get to work by bikes are relaxed, unstressed, think more logically, 'became' (zly czas) creative and have new, great ideas, for example to provide certain activities to increase 'the' (niepotr) sales. In conclusion, commuting by bikes in 'large important' (cos mi to nie siedzi dobrze, lepiej, large and imp.) towns has many pluses.