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Kurilpa Bridge it is a bridge for cyclists and pedestrians over the Brisbane River in Brisbane, opened October 4, 2009. It combines the business district of the city of art and culture. The construction began on 12 December 2007.The bridge was designed by the Danish office of Arup Engineers, and the execution was to Baulderstone Queensland Ltd. The bridge is 470 m long, 6.5 m wide. The built two viewing platforms and place to rest. The object is imposing and contemporary. The bridge complete to were used: 1500 m3 of concrete, 50t steel and 7km ropes. The bridge is composed of rigid elements connected by means of slender, which are mutually simultaneously compress and stabilize. The bridge is illuminated using LED technology. Power comes from 54 solar panels mounted on the bridge. Every week from crossing Kurilpa Bridge will benefit approximately 36 500 people.

Ja widzę tą pracę jakby nieumiejętnie poskładaną z kawałków ściągniętych z różnych źródeł. Uważam że lepiej byłoby gdybyś sama prostymi zdaniami napisała;)

Kurilpa Bridge it is a bridge for cyclists and pedestrians over the Brisbane River in Brisbane. The construction began on 12 December 2007 and was opened 4 October 2009. It combines the business district of the city of art and culture center. The bridge was designed by the Danish office Enginners Arup and built by Baulderstone Queensland Ltd. The bridge is 470 m long and 6.5 m wide. The built two viewing platforms and place to rest. In the construction of the bridge were used: 1500 m3 of concrete, 50t steel and 7km ropes. The bridge is illuminated using LED technology. Power comes from 54 solar panels mounted on the bridge. Bridge helps to protect the environment because it can not be after him to travel by car. The object is imposing and contemporary. Particularly impressive is the appearance of the bridge at night when it is illuminated. Walk across the bridge is possible regardless of the weather because the entire length of the roof.

Lepiej ?

1 zd. Kurilpa Bridge it is... To brzmi: () most on jest dla rowerzystów i...
Kurilpa Bridge = it
...in Brisbane, Australia.
Ponadto,
combines napisz ŁĄCZY, jest ang odpowiednik;) pierwsze OF w tym zdaniu jest źle potrzebujesz
innego słowa;)
np....by engineers from Arup Group in Denmark
np TheRE ARE built two viewing platforms and A place to rest.
...50t OF steel and 7km OF ropes.
Bridge helps to protect the environment because it can not be after him to travel by car. Przynajmniej część tego zdania (po because) jest z jakiegoś kiepskiego translatora, - spróbuj poprawić.
Następne zdanie jest źle, imo.
Możliwe że jest więcej błędów;)