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Dear Mr
We are pleased to place an order with your company for sport equipment.
We carefully considered your proposal and we accept the 15 % discount, which you offered for us. Please pack the equipment in boxes and to number 1-5. The shoes pack separately, please.
If the colors they have chosen are not in stock, they will accept an alternative provided the designs are those stipulated on the order.
We herewith place our order. We look forward to your confirmation. Please
confirm in writing.
Yours sincerely