argumentative essay

In comparison with the past, nowadays many couples decide to have much less children. There is a very popular family model "2+1" which means two parents and one children, particularly in developed countries. It is positive for the child to have many siblings?
First of all, it is generally agreed that in homes where there is many children there are stronger relationships betwen them. They respect each other, help and willingly share delights and toys. Secondly, many tutors and parents claim that children from large families can value and respect things which they have. Only children are often spoiled because they have too many gadgets and goodies. Thirdly, an elder brother or sister can help with homework or explain something which is incomprehensible and hence children who have many siblings can do well in school.
On the other hand, living in home where there are so many people could be troublesome sometimes. For instance, siblings have to share their rooms, bathroom, books or desk. What is more, having many children means much more expenses for their parents and consequently, sometimes children from the large families cannot have things which they want to have. Last, but not least, parents often cannot spend enough time with each of their children.
To sum up, there are many advantages and disadvantages of living in the large families and it is sure that opinions about it are differentiated.

In comparison with the past, nowadays many couples decide to have 'much less' (nie pisz tak, to jest dziwactwo, jest slowo 'fewer' i tutaj ono pasuje) children. There is a very popular family model "2+1" which means two parents and 'one children' (popatrz na to. Cos tu nie tak?), particularly in (ja dalbym przedimek) developed countries. (tutaj cos brakuje - skaczesz z jednej mysli do drugiej) It is positive for the child to have many siblings?
First of all, it is generally agreed that in homes where 'there is' (od kiedy mieszmy l. mnoga z l. poj?) many children there are stronger relationships 'betwen' (ortog) them.

On the other hand, living in (przedimek) home where there are so many people could be troublesome sometimes.
What is more, having many children means much more expenses for their parents and consequently, sometimes children from 'the' (niepotr) large families cannot have things which they want to have.

To sum up, there are many advantages and disadvantages of living in 'the' (nieppotr) large families and 'it is sure' (bardzo dziwne okreslenie- zmien) that opinions about it are differentiated.

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