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Mary has recently gone on special diet. She eats no
cookies, bars, chocolate and starts to like
fruit and vegetables, she also does without
fizzy drinks and beer. She also drinks
still water. Mary spends a lot of time on
exercising and swimming. She likes not
lying on the sofa and watching TV. She also
drinks coffee without sugar. Mary
thinks that if she behaves like that, she
will certainly lose a lot of kilograms and won’t
for sure put on weight. She does this because she is
a little bit plump and she wants to be
much more skinny than her friends.
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Mary has recently gone on PRZEDIMEK special diet. She eats no
cookies, bars BARY?, chocolate and starts to like
fruit and vegetables, she also does without
fizzy drinks and beer. She also drinks
still water. Mary spends a lot of time on
exercising and swimming. She likes notDOESN'T LIKE
lying on the sofa and watching TV. She also
drinks coffee without sugar. Mary
thinks that if she behaves< -ZLE SLOWO like that, she
will certainly lose a lot of kilograms and won’t
for sure< -DAJ TO W INNYM MIEJSCU put on weight. She does this because she is
a little bit plump and she wants to be
much more skinny than her friends.
edytowany przez zielonosiwy: 13 gru 2015
'that she put on weight' jest niegramatyczne
Dziękuję, a teraz :

Mary has recently gone on a special diet. She eats no
cookies, candy bars, chocolate and starts to like
fruit and vegetables, she also does without
fizzy drinks and beer. She also drinks
still water. Mary spends a lot of time on
exercising and swimming. She doesn’t like
lying on the sofa and watching TV. She also
drinks coffee without sugar. Mary
thinks that if she acts like that, she will
certainly lose a lot of kilograms and will not
put on weight. She does this because she is
a little bit plump and she wants to be
much more skinny than her friends.
spends time exercising
spend money on sth

skinnier
starts to like - wątpie. może np 'is starting'
She eats no cookies, candy bars, chocolate and 'starts' (zly czas, tutaj ma byc 'started') to like fruit and vegetables, she also does without fizzy drinks and beer.
She does this because she is a little bit plump and she wants to be much more 'skinny' (zle slowo, tutaj ma byc 'skinnier') than her friends.
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