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Hi Thomas!

Thank you for your email. I've got so much to tell you. Recently in my school we have talked about environmental protection. We noticed that in our town people don't care for our environmental. They don't save the water and don't segregate household waste for recycling. Our streets are full of litter. It's terrible!
We have decided to organize the Earth Day in our school. We want invite as many people as possible and tell about our problem. We want encourage residents to recycling. Teachers plan to do presentation about ways which shrink pollution in our region.
I need it help for our town and people begin to care for environmental.
I want to invite you fot this event. It will be on this Saturday at 4PM in my school. I hope to see you there.
our enviromental - to nie jest rzeczownik
the water - mowiac ogolnie o czymś nie stawiamy przedimka
tell ale komu?
to recycling - zła forma
przedimek przed teachers i presentation i ways
which CAN reduce the pollution
I need it help for our town and people begin to care for environmental - niezrozumiałe
environmental - środowiskowy
an Earth Day - to nie jest jedyny dzień ziemi na świecie!
czego brakuje po want?
tell komu
po encourage uzywa sie bezokolicznika, nie formy z ing
mowisz o wszystkich lub niektorych nauczycielach ze szkoly. Musisz cos dodac przed teachers, musisz tez uzyc present continuous
presentation jest policzalne
shrink to skarpetki po praniu, uzyj reduce
need it help - niezrozumiale
invite to coś
zamiast 'be' uzyj 'odbedzie sie'
bez 'on'

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