Sprawdzenie rozprawki

Witam. Czy mogłabym prosić o sprawdzenie rozprawki, wskazanie błędów?
Temat rozprawki: "Coraz więcej osób rezygnuje z samodzielnego przygotowywania posiłków i spożywa je
poza domem. Napisz rozprawkę, w której przedstawisz swoją opinię na temat tego
zjawiska, odnosząc się do: jakości spożywanych posiłków, wygody. Wypowiedź powinna zawierać od 200 do 250 słów. U mnie jest to 233.
Each of us every day goes to school or work. Formerly we have took breakfast of the house. Now this is changing.
In the first place we save time when we choose eating outside home. When we don't cook at home we have free time. Free time we can spend for more nice actions. Secondly, this is very comfortable option if you don't like cook. Restaurants offer home delivery. Thirdly, in restaurants we can taste different dishes which we don't prepare at home. Everyone will find something for himself. On the other hand, food in restaurants sometimes may be unhealthy and fattening. Especially hamburger's or chips. Sometimes food is prepared in unhygienic. We may be sick. May be have fever. What is more, often in restaurants food i very expensive. Dishes is small. Secondly, often we must first book a place on restaurant. Sometimes it is uncomfortable and tiring. Thirdly, if we always eats outside home we have no possibilities laern to cooks. For example we have suddenly guests . We can't prepare delicious dinner or cake.
Taking eveything into account eating outside home it has it's pros and cons. Sometimes it's wonderful when we go to restaurant with friends or with husband. However himself prepare a meals also it's maybe wonderdul. All in all, eating outside home is not the best idea. I think that though we become lazy and dependent.

Co myślicie o tej rozprawce? Wydaje mi się, że jest to takie "lanie wody".
Dziękuję za odpowiedzi i poświęcony czas.
Pozdrawiam
momoko90

'Each of us' (to jest nie prawda, bo ja np ani do jednego ani do drugiego nie chodze, lepiej napisac Many people) every day goes to school or work. Formerly we (tutaj brakuje 'would') have 'took' (zle, tutaj 'taken') breakfast 'of' (zle slowo, potrzeba 'w') the house.
In the first place we save time when we choose eating outside (a gdzie przedimek?, poszedl na sniadanie?) home. When we don't cook at home we have (tutaj mozna dodac 'more') free time. Free time we can spend for more 'nice actions' (nie, to jest zle, tutaj mozesz napisac 'nicer things', more enjoyable things - cos takiego). Secondly, this is (przedimek) very comfortable option if you don't like (tu brak slowa) cook. Thirdly, in restaurants we can taste different dishes which we don't (tutaj brakuje slowa, moze 'always') prepare at home. Everyone will find something for 'himself' (a dlaczego nie 'herself'? Co to? kobiety nie wychodza na sniadanie? lepiej uzyj slowa 'themselves').
Especially 'hamburger's' (co to do tego hamburgery nalezy? tutaj potrzeba zwykla l. mnoga) or chips. Sometimes food is prepared in unhygienic (tutaj brakuje slowa, moze 'conditions', albo mozesz napisac 'unhygenically).
'May be have fever' (nie, lepiej...dolacz to zdanie do porzedniego i napisz, 'or have a fever or even die') . What is more, often in restaurants food 'i' (popraw) very expensive. Dishes 'is' (ale 'dishes' to l. mnoga) small. Secondly, often we must first book a place 'on' (nie, nikt nie wchodzi na restauracje, tylko do' IN the) (mozesz tez napisac...we must reserve a place) restaurant.
Thirdly, if we always 'eats' (tutaj potrzeba czasownika odpowiedniego do l. mnogiej 'we', a to co masz to 3os.l.poj) outside home we have no possibilities TO 'laern' (ortog) to 'cooks' (nie, tutaj COOK). For example 'we have suddenly guests' (nie, napisz to inaczej...for example if we suddenly have guests) . We can't prepare (przedimek) delicious dinner or (przedimek) cake.
Taking 'eveything' (ortog) into account eating outside (przedimek) home 'it' (niepotrzebne slowo) has 'it's' (nie, tutaj napisales 'it is', a miales na mysli 'its') pros and cons. Sometimes it's wonderful when we go to (przedimek) restaurant with friends or with (przedimek) 'husband' (mozesz napisac 'spouse i wtedy to bedzie znaczylo husband/wife). However 'himself' (nie rozumiem co to slowo tutaj robi) preparING 'a' (nie dajemy przedimka przed l. mnoga 'meals') meals also 'it's' (niepotr) maybe 'wonderdul' (bl;ad ortog a moze Freudian slip?)
I think that 'though' (nie, tu masz zle slowo, chciales napisac 'through this') we become lazy and dependent.

Zrob cos z tymi przedimkami (a, an, the). One tez chca byc uzyte w zdaniu, a ty je tak pomijasz ...:-)

Jednak sporo mam tych błędów. Dziękuję za poświęcony czas :)