Dear Editor,
I am writing in connection with the article published in yeaterd
ay’s edition of
your newspaper. (dobrze było podac jakis tytul tej gazety) It
was about(troche zbyt uzywane w mowie, uzyj deal with albo cos podobnego) a
deletorious(zbyt formalne) influence of sports, music and film stars on young peop
e. I strongly disagree with the aut
or’s view and I would like to
describe (moze przedstawic introd...) someone who
in my estimation(niepotrzebne) can be a role model for youngsters.
Bb is an American actress, famous for starring in films such as „C” or „g”. In 2004 she had a car accident
in which(with the res...that) both
of (opcjonalne)her legs were (bardziej natychmiastowe got) paralysed. Since then she has been confined to a wheelchair. Despite her disability, Bb did not give up. She started attending a dance studio where able-bodied (and niepełnosprawni ludzie)could dance together and soon set up her own
one(nie ma odniesienia trzeba napisac co założyła). Today
, the(jej) school has
branches (moze agencje) in several countries and the members perform for (przedimek) global audience.
Individuals like Bb surely have a positive impact on young people. She keeps moving on despite the adversity that
occured to her("ona jest fac...with)". Bb encourages the young to work hard and tells them not to give up even (kiedy)circumstances are unfavourable. Little do you know how many motivational speeches she
gave(present perfect). She is an excellent example of a person who devotes
her(ich) life to others and can be a role model for the young.
In my view Bb can be a perfect inspiration for youngsters and we
should(moze moglibysmy) learn from her. I am curious (as) to
know(niepotrzebne) what other readers think about this article and hope you will publish my letter
along (niepotrzebne) with other replies.
Yours faithfully,