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Today I am going to talk about modern technology and future of technology in education. Nowadays almost every school use technological devices. Is it good or bad? whats means for the future?

Progressive technology development doesn’t miss education. Technological devices helps teachers doing lessons, schools often reach for projectors or intractive whiteboards, it makes lessons more understandable and interensting.
Many schools have decided to use ipads or laptops instead of books, it is very comfortable and effective, but also expansive.

What about the future?
We can be sure that in the future technology will absoultely master the education. It’s hard to imagine what else could be discovered.
Maybe we will be able to teach something without teaching with some unimaginable machine.
I think that in the nearest future we should expect the end of textbook era, books are heavy and uncomfortable, so thats sounds amazing, isnt it?
Technology has one disadvantage, it cost. Modern technology in education requires money.
Public schools probably are going to demand money from students, but many students won’t have this money and that makes a problem.

In summary, Modern technology are going to be inseparable part of the new education. Thanks to that education will be much more comfortable for teachers and students. Life will be simpler, but also more expansive.
Today I am going to talk about modern technology and (Czegoś brakuje.)future of technology in education. Nowadays almost every school use (Zła forma czasownika.)technological devices. Is it good or bad? whats means for the future? (Czegoś brakuje w tym zdaniu - do poprawy.)

Progressive technology development doesn’t miss education. Technological devices helps (Zła forma czasownika.) teachers doing (Zła forma czaswonika. Ponadto nie użyłbym w ogóle "do". To brzmi zbyt nisko.) lessons, (Tu nie może być przecinek.)schools often reach for projectors or intractive (Literówka w tym słowie.) whiteboards, (Kropka zamiast przecinka lub po przecinku: "which makes".) it makes lessons more understandable and interensting.
Many schools have decided to use ipads or laptops instead of books, (Jak wyżej - bez przecinka lub zdanie z which.) it is very comfortable and effective, but also expansive.(Literówka).

What about the future?
We can be sure that in the future technology will absoultely master the education. It’s hard to imagine what else could be discovered.
Maybe we will be able to teach something without teaching with some unimaginable machine. (Nielogiczne zdanie.)
I think that in the nearest future we should expect the end of (Czegoś brakuje.) textbook era,(Błąd interpunkcyjny.) books are heavy and uncomfortable, so thats (Literówka.) sounds amazing, isnt (Nie "isn't - potrzebne jest inne słowo.)it?
Technology has one disadvantage, (Raczej myślnik).it cost. (Zła forma czasownika.) Modern technology in education requires money.
Public schools probably are (Zły szyk wyrazów.) going to demand money from students, but many students won’t have this money and that makes a problem.

In summary, Modern technology are (Zła forma.) going to be inseparable part of the new education. Thanks to that education will be much more comfortable for teachers and students. Life will be simpler, but also more expansive. (Literówka.)
edytowany przez Rydzio: 23 wrz 2017
many students won’t have this money and that makes a problem.
Progressive technology development doesn’t miss education. ja bym tu nie użył 'miss'
Many schools have decided to use ipads or laptops instead of books
interensting
absoultely

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