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DMU Steppers are making the biggest show with CASS ever. You can meet them during universities` events all around the United Kingdom this year, and take part in CASS challenge. Come to their stand, learn about saving money and have fun.

Engine staff will be there to give advice and help with economics, glad of service using students will show you how to save money and keep living your previous life with partying and travelling like always, they have also experienced it.
DMU Steppers can teach you how to step and you will be able to record your own video for #CASSChallenge. You can upload it to your own Facebook and Instagram or CASS fanpage. The best movie will acquire award from Engine and winner will be invited for next Steppers show.
The first show took part during DMU Open Days - 18th of February and the number of interested students has exceeded our expectations. Dozens of students were dancing in Flash Mobs with our Steppers, who showed their techniques and easiest steps. People had fun, get water from CASS stand after dancing and advisors had the opportunity to explain the idea of account switching. Students interested in saving money were able to receive longer talk with CASS stuff, get some leaflets and leave their emails for sequent contact.
The aim of the campaign is to gain students awareness and show them the idea of the CASS. Young people do not have self-consciousness about saving money, the majority of them just live from one pay-out to another. The Engine would like to indicate how to keep living their previous lives, with partying, travelling, shopping like always and save money in case of accident or for future life.
#CASSChallenge, flash mobs and DMU Steppers are great tool to wake up people, gain their attention and engage with money saving. Young people, full of energy, with smiles on their faces and loud music are things that always attracts the eye and allure students. Moreover when they are invited to have fun and get the opportunity to win a challenge their attention increases and due to it they unconsciously take part in something bigger, what can change their lives.

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