LET’S GO (tutaj wg mnie brakuje 'and') BUY SOME FREE TIME
Have you ever 'wonder' (to ma byc czas przeszly - to 'wondered') how your children spend their free time after school? According to 'the' (niepotr) research and the surveys, a significant part of teenagers 'chooses' (nie, tutaj jest l. mn - teenagers, to 'choose') shopping malls as the best place to spend their time instead of a playing field or a swimming pool.
While writing this article for the newspaper agency, I am sitting in a cosy small pub 'placed' (moze lepsze slowo 'located') inside one of the biggest shopping malls in New York City. I am drinking coffee and from my seat, I am able to watch a 'river of people' rushing everywhere behind the window.
Even in the pub, there are more young people than 'aging' (chyba 'ageing') adults like me.
There is no doubt that 'this situation' (nie jest jasno do czego to sie odnosi, jaka 'situation') is beneficial for the country's economy.
On the other hand, surely 'it' (ja wolalabym 'this') is not the most developing activity which teenagers could do. In the time that they spend searching for discounts, young people could 'forward' (nie za bardzo to pasuje, poszukaj inne slowo) their passions – something that in the future may turn out as their great success.
To sum up, I think everything is good when it is used in 'a reasonable amount' (nie, lepiej 'moderation'). As far as I am concerned, spending free time in shopping centers by teenagers is all right as long as it will not become the main activity or worse – the 'abuse' (daj inne slowo, np. 'aim' czy cos podobnego) on which young people 'spend' (tutaj ja dalabym cos innego np. 'waste') all their money.