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Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
wiem ze w tym tekscie jest dosc duzo bledow ale osoby ktore znaja angielski troche lepiej niz ja ( a jest ich duzo ;)) to prosze o sprawdzenie i poprawienie bledow... z gory dziex (a moze jeszcze cos... nauczycielka kazala nam napisac kontynuacje tekstu z podrecznika... )

They continued to watch the film.
"Door opened (nie wiem jak napisac "Drzwi sie otworzyly")and over there stayed some person, it was inpossible to see a face because it was too dark.
Person went inside and approached to guy which lied on the floor and started to beat and kick him.
Guy writhed with paint."
Everybody watched it so attentive that nobody noticed (zauwazyl?) that Raman lied also on the floor.
" -Get up now!!" said man in black coat. -and stop kicking him- he was so angry...
-we must take the others and go...- all three went out the room"
Suddenly everybody are drawing there. It was so horriblle feeling. Efter few minutes they .......(pojawili sie) on some completely distroy playgrond. It was night, but stars ....... (nie swiecily sie). Efter next few minutes came raven and took all of them. Everything was just so strange.
Raven .......(opuscil ich)on the roof of some skyscraper. There was even more darkly, more quietly, just more horrible. ...... (wczesniej wspominani) two mans started to push (Popychac) them into the big hole which was so deep at it was inpossible to see the bottom.
Exactly two seconds before ...........(jak zostali by zepchnieci) came such a huge bird and woulded rescue them. But it was too late, they... woke up! But they woke up not at home but in the same building which they was dreamed about but on the bottom. In fountain. Nobody knew exactly what happended. They walked back home and .....(poczuli) that something is burning it was the video. Strangely cassette recorder was whole and ........ (nie spalony). Everything else was the same like usual. They decided to ............(nie mowic nikomu) what happend.

mam nadzieje ze zrozumieliscie mnie wiecej o co chodzi, slowka ktorych nie umialam napisalam w nawiasie po kropeczkach. Naprawde bardzo mi zalezy na sprawdzeniu i poprawieniu bledow, z gory baaaaaardzo dziekuje
prosze pomozcie!!!!
to dla mnie naprawde bardzo wazne!!! prosze tylko kogos o rzucenie okiem na ten tekst...

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