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James was inventing paths of animals(miałem tu na myśli: podążał ścieżkami zwierząt, tylko nie wiem jak to napisać). He was
at empty zoo. It was 2 o'clock and was cold and wet.
He saw a gorilla's cage. Gorilla was shocked
and tryed to go away but he was a babe in the woods.
He had cuts and dirty fur.
Gorilla saw James and tuched hand.

James found a nailfile and started sawing the padlock.
He opened the cage and at this moment someone came
and gave him a black look.
A boy grabbed gorilla's hand and they started running.
At first sight it seemed that they have no chance to escape.
They were scaried and gnashed theirs teeth.
They were running in the labyrinth of animals cages and
evil man was with every second closer them. Gorilla
teared lose from boy, humped on the man and overthrew
him. Gorilla and James left zoo and came to the jungle.
They were going through the dense forest and were coming
to the coast of the river. Suddenly James heard hissing.
It was a big boa snake on the tree. They started running
again. When they came to the river, saw the boat
that was a theirs ray of hope and got in.

James was exhausted but was still alive and with scraps
of power started rowing the boat. When they were
on the deep water boy sighted with relief because
they was (już - already?) safe. James told "It's OK" and shouted
"we're free!".

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