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" Nie ma przekonywujących powodów by wykorzystywać zwierzęta do doświadczeń medycznych. Agree or disagree? "

Nowadays medicine is still developing. Every day we know something more about new vaccines against various diseases or incredible methods of curing. When we go to the drugstore we can see many shelfs with diversified choice of medicines. Unfortunately most of those drugs would never exist without medical experiments on animals.
First of all, medical experiments help us in difficult problems with unknown illnesses. In this way we are able to find out a special cure and learn something more about symptoms and process of the illness. We can not only know the effects of disease but effectively protect ourselves as well.
Secondly, medical research cause that we can predict the course of sickness and use the suitable medicine. Thanks to that we prevent the proliferation of illness. People may also use medical experiments on animals to produce the most needed drugs. For example if we change the DNA of some animal during medical experiments we will receive improved organism which can give us the rare medicine.
On the other hand most of tested animals are kept in very bad conditions. We often forget that animals have also feelings. People keep frightened animals in small cages, sometimes even without food and water. Some of medical experiments are especially painful for them but people don’t care about it because they want to achieve their aim.
To summing up, I think that medical experiments on animals have more advantages. People can develop medicine, invent new cures which can safe somebody’s life. We are getting stronger and more resistant to diseases. However, people should be more careful in their activities. They should try to care not only about their health but animals’ life as well.
...or incredible methods of BEING CURED. When we go to the drugstore we can see many 'shelfs' (NIe, shelf, ale shelves) with...
First of all, medical experiments help us 'in' (WITH)difficult problems 'with' (AND) unknown illnesses.
...and learn something more about symptoms and THE process of the illness.
...course of THE sickness and use A suitable medicine. 'Thanks' (lepiej Due) to that we prevent the ...
We often forget that animals 'have also' (ALSO HAVE) feelings.
..them but people don't care about 'it' (THAT) because they want to achieve their aim.
To 'summing up' (NIE, albo To sum up, albo IN summing up) I think that medical experiments on animals have more advantages. People can develop medicine, invent new cures which can 'safe' (SAVE) somebody's life.
They should try to care not only about their OWN health but ALSO ABOUT THE 'animal's life' (zalezy czy mowisz o jednym czy o wielu - jedno 'animal's life' ale lepiej 'animals lives'-wielu)as well.

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