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Ray Dakin had no idea what would happen to him when he woke up today. Day was beautiful. Nothing dircted it happen to somethin bed.
At 3 o'clock p.m. Ray was watchind TV peacefully. When he wanted to drink he was going to kitchen. As Ray was going downstairs, he looked put of the window and saw orange flames about a mile away. He ran to his mother. The ran together to outside. There was so much thick smoke. They embarked to car. Mother nervously tried to start car, but nothing happened. So they ran on foot. While they were running, Ray's mother fell and sprained her ankle. Ray took his mother on hands. Fog hovered. Ray saw a police car and two polcemen. 'We are save' Ray yelled. (i tu jeszcze chciałam napisać że policjanci zabrali ich do samochodu i zawieźli w bezpieczne miejsce, ale nie wiem za bardzo jak)

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