proszę o poprawę !!! niedużo !

Hi !
Pięknie proszę o poprawę. Zamieszczam całośc, nie podzielone na akapity czy części. Proszę sprawdzcie, bardzo mi na tym zależy...

The man change the nature and adapt her to our needs. Unremitting expansion of human result in more and more influence on environment which lead to bring into cultivation increasingly new and bigger areas on our planet. It cause that weaker species of animals die out. The negative influence into the environment and live in them vegetals and animals has the develop of industry, urbanization and more and more bigger human's interference on nature. Series of human’s activities guide to specie’s danger. Men disturb the harmony in the nature. The next reason why some species die out are increasing pollution of natural environment. Everybody can protect the nature. A lot of organisation exist to protect endangered species of animal. In Poland endangered extinction species are inscribe into the Red Polish Animals Book. There are National Parks too. In our country are 23 National Parks. Other ways of protecting endangeed species of animals is ecological education and dissemination the environmental life and stance. To protect the wildlife on our planet is unusually important.
Man as a alive organism is a part of nature.. We live in them and we should care of it. Our planet and the wildlife can live without men but men can’t survive without the nature.

The man changeS 'the' (bez the)nature and adaptS her to 'our' (jak man-to his) needs. Unremitting expansion of 'human' (czy masz na mysli humankind/mankind)resultS in more and more influence on THE environment which 'lead to bring' (cos tu nie tak?) into cultivation increasingly new and bigger areas on our planet. THIS causeS that weaker species of animals TO die out.
The negative influence into the environment and live in them vegetals and
animals has the develop of industry, urbanization and more and more
bigger human's interference on nature.- tego zdanie nie rozumiem, musze sprawdzic to po polsku)
Series of humaN activities 'guide'(chyba zle slowo) to 'specie's' (czy masz na mysli species w l. mnogiej, to species) danger.(nie rozumiem zdania)
Men disturb 'the harmony in the nature' (lepiej nature's harmony).
The next reason why some species die out 'are' (jak reason l.poj to 'is') THE increasing..
Everybody can protect 'the'(bez the) nature. 'A lot of' (lepiej Many) organisationS exist to protect endangered species of animalS. In Poland
endangered extinction species are inscribeD into the 'Red Polish Animals
Book' (nie jestem pewna kolejnosci slow tutaj).
In 'our' (lepiej Poland) THERE are 23 National Parks. Other ways of protecting endangEd species of animals 'is' (jak 'ways' to 'are') ecological education and dissemination OF the environmental life and stance. To protect the wildlife on our planet is 'unusually' (chyba lepiej vitally) important.
Man as a 'alive' (LIVE) organism AND is 'a' (chyba bez 'a') part of nature.. We live in 'them'? (nie rozumiem-them?) and we should TAKE care of 'it'(niemoze byc 'them' a wtedy 'it').
..survive without nature (bez the)

Terri !!! Dziękuję dziękuję dziękuję dziękuję dziękuję dziękuję !!!

Negatywny wpływ na środowisko oraz żyjące w nim rośliny i zwierzęta ma rozwój przemysłu, urbanizacja oraz coraz większa ingerencja człowieka w naturę.
Napisz to zdanie w dobrej kolejnosci - nie tlumacz slowo w slowo z polskiego - tak nic z tego nie wychodzi.
Rozwoj przemyslu, urbanizacja itd maja negatywny wplyw na srodowisko i zyjace w nim rosliny.
THE development of industry, urbanization and 'more and more'(increasing) human interference- 1...)HAS A
(A negative influence ON the environment and livING vegetaBLES (moze lepiej plants) and animals- 2...)

sorry - zauwazylam blad..lepiej.. THIS causeS THE weaker species of animals TO die out.

Mam do was pytanie (nie tylko do Terri): Na jakim poziomie jestem językowo ? Tak około ?

Dziękuję Terri. Bardzo mi pomogłaś ! Serdeczne dzięki !

W tamtych zdaniach:

Negatywny wpływ na środowisko oraz żyjące w nim rośliny i zwierzęta ma rozwój przemysłu, urbanizacja oraz coraz większa ingerencja człowieka w naturę.

The negative influence into the environment and live in them vegetals and animals has the develop of industry, urbanization and more and more bigger human’s interference on nature.

Szereg ludzkich działań prowadzi do zagrożenia gatunków.
Series of human’s activities guide to specie’s danger.

Man as a alive organism is a part of nature.. We live in them and we should care of it. Dlaczego THEM jest niepoprawne ? Jak w takim razie ma być ?

Negatywny wpływ....to zdanie juz wyzej poprawilam.
Szereg ludzkich działań prowadzi do zagrożenia gatunków.
Series of 'human's'-to jest zle-bo to znaczy jednego czlowieka - a ty masz na mysli ludzi-humankind/mankind activities -'guide'-jest zlym slowem tutaj, w zdaniu potrzeba..leads to..'specie's'-to odnosi sie do jednego gatunku-a ty masz na mysli wiecej - tutaj l.mnoga 'species'-mysle, ze zagrozenie to 'extinction'..the danger of extinction of the species.
We live in them (my mieszkamy w nich?)..we live in IT and we should care of it.

>The man changeS 'the' (bez the)nature....
That's how much of your scribbling I can take.
Man changes, not "the man" changes...
I've told you before. Stop that. You are clueless.

Buncombe-
Thank you once again, for pointing this out to me. It is a pity though, that we don't see more of your help on this forum (now you know that it exists for the purposes of 'polishing up your English') - perhaps all of us could learn something from you. Writing 'you are clueless' - does not really encourage me to learn - perhaps a more softer approach might be in order.