Wypowiedź

in a moment Lil said "It`s a beatiful lamp, but ...it`s only common lamp"
Her sister looked at she and smile. Lil continued "I understand that Ann has everything, but don`t have dear family. I understand that Family are more important than every things on world !". Sister said "and what with the lamp ?", Lil replied (odpowiedzieć) "It`s easy. Everybody have "lamp", for Lil it is money and wealt, my lamp is family. This is my little lamp". Sister hugs.
...the road was dark, but "the lamp" shone bright...(Droga byla ciemna, ale lampa świeciłą jaśniej"

in a moment (?) Lil said "It`s a beaUtiful lamp, but ...it`s only A common lamp"
Her sister looked at 'she' HER and smileD. Lil continued "I understand that
Ann has everything, but SHE doESn`t have 'dear' (moze lepiej 'a loving') family. I understand that
THE family 'are' (lepiej 'is') more important than 'every things on' EVERYTHING IN THE world !". LIL'S sister said "and what with the lamp ?"
Lil replied "It`s easy. Everybody haS HIS OWN lamp, for 'Lil' (chyba 'Ann'?) it is money and wealtH, AND my lamp is MY/THE family. This is my little lamp". THE sister 'hugs' HUGGED.
The road was dark, but the lamp shone brightLY...

I bardzo prosze nie zmieniac mi 'everybody has his own lamp' na 'their'. Specjalnie tak napisalem jako tradycjonalista :-)

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prepositions always take object pronouns

she - subject pronoun
her - object pronoun

looked at her nie looked at she

Ponadto pare glupich bledow, ktore pewnie wynikaja z niesprawdzenia tej wypowiedzi po napisaniu.