Prosze o sprawdzenie

Dear Redakcja
I am writting in response to article wchich was in Monday's issue of magazine. Tittle of this article is "Zoos should be close down".I read it yeasterday and I think that it is very interesting. I agree with issue which was circumscribed in this article. In this article was writtnig about conditions of animals live in zoos. I think that they have very bad live conditions in zoos. They have a worse food which this in nature surrounding. Animals in zoos are closed in cage and they hurt a lot of. I think that zoos schould be close down and animals schould go back for them nature surroinding. I think I am not only one who schold express them opinion about animals living in zoos and when tey should live.
Yours faithfully
XYZ

Prosze pisz powolniej i bez literowek.Zamiast skupic sie na tresci, ja poprawiam literowki.

Dear 'Redakcja' (to jest polski slowo- ang. jest w slowniku)
I am writing in response to AN article 'wchich' (WHICH) 'was' (APPEARED) in Monday's issue of YOUR magazine. THE tiTle of this article 'is' (WAS) "Zoos should be closeD down".
I read it 'yeasterday' (YESTERDAY) and I think that it is A very interesting ARTICLE. I agree with THE issue which was circumscribed in this article.
In this article IT was writTEN 'about conditions of animals live in zoos' (zmien to). I think that they have very bad 'live' (LIVING) conditions in THE zoos.
They have 'a' (Bez a) THE worse food which 'this in nature surrounding'-czy to translatorkiem?.
Animals in zoos are closed in 'cage' (CAGES) and they hurt 'a lot of' (a lot of what?). I think that zoos 'schould' (SHOULD) be closeD down and THE animals 'schould' (SHOULD) go back 'for them nature' (TO THEIR NATURAL) 'surroinding'(SURROUNDINGS) I think I am not THE only one who 'schold' (to juz 3ci raz-niemoze byc literowka - SHOULD) expressES 'them' (nie, THIS) opinion about animals living in zoos and 'when' (wheRE) 'tey' (THEY) should live.