opis domu pilnie!!!

Czy moze ktos sprawdzic mi bledy prosze i z gory dziekuje;))

I live in the detached house in the center city. This is big and old house. There are three bedrooms, two bathrooms, livingroom and kitchen. On the upstairs are my room , my brother’s room and bathroom which is very small. My room is big, spacious and sunny and I very like it but I spend there very little time. On the downstairs are bedroom my parent’s, livingroom, kitchen and bathroom. Our kitchen is very big and practical where my dad spend too much time because he really like cooking. Bathroom is big, too and everyone like it. But the most important room in the house is the livingroom where is beautifull fireplace and large, comfortable sofa. There is very pleasantly. Behind the house is small garden where are trees and grass. We usually doing there barbecue. In front of house is street. But this street is very quickly. Houses in my street are side by side. And my neighbours are very nice and understanding.

I live in the {nie "the", A} detached house in the center {OF THE} city. This is {A} big and old house. There are three bedrooms, two bathrooms, {A}living room and {A} kitchen. {bez: On the} upstairs {nie: are, lepiej: THERE IS} my room , my brother's room and {THE} bathroom{,} which is very small. My room is big, spacious and sunny and I very like it {lepiej: I LIKE IT VERY MUCH} but I spend {2- there} {1- very little time}. {Bez: On the} downstairs {nie: are, lepiej: THERE IS} {2- bedroom} {1- my parent's}, {THE} living room, {THE} kitchen and {THE} bathroom. Our kitchen is very big and practical{.} {bez: where} My dad spend too much {moze: VERY MUCH?} time {THERE} because he really like {3 os.: LIKES} cooking. {THE} Bathroom is big {bez przecinka} too and everyone like {3 os.: LIKES} it. But the most important room in the house is the living room{,} where {THERE} is {A} beautifull {pis. BEAUTIFUL} fireplace and {A} large, comfortable sofa. {bez: There, lepiej: IT} is very pleasantly {pleasantly to przyslowek, potrzebujesz przymiotnik: PLEASANT} {THERE}. Behind the house {THERE} is {A} small garden { zamiast: where are, lepiej: WITH} trees and grass. We usually {nie: doing, lepiej: DO, chociaz bardziej pasuje: HAVE} {2- there}{1- barbecueS}. In front of {THE} house {THERE} is {A} street. But this street is very quickly {lepiej: VERY BUSY}. {THE} Houses in my street { bez: are, lepiej: STAND} side by side and my neighbours are very nice and understanding.

jeszcze: my dad SPENDS, nie spend

center-AmE ale neighbours-BrE - lepiej napisac centRE-BrE.