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One Monday morning in a small country town sixteen years old boy got up late. Tom was woken up by his mother and quickly ran down the stairs. His mother told him that she wouldn’t let him go to school without any food but he replied he wasn’t a child. Tom ran out of the house but he had to came back because he forgot his school bag. When he arrived to bus stop he saw bus and jumped on. This morning Tom had to finish his maths homework so he asked Julie if she could lend him her book. Julie replied that she couldn’t because then he would copy the answer. On the bus was very loud because the driver turned on the radio. Tom couldn’t concentrate so he asked Mr Dennis to turn the radio down. When he didn’t get reply he leant forward and looked at the driver. His eyes were closed. The bus started to go down a top steep hill. Tom and Julie steered the heavy bus, which went faster and faster. An ambulance soon arrived and Mr Dennis was taken to hospital. No one was bleeding badly only some student had cuts and bruises. Tom and Julie became school bus heroes.
One Monday morning{,} in a small country town{,} sixteen years old {jesli chcesz uzyc tego w formie przymiotnika - szesnastoletni, powinno byc: A SIXTEEN-YEAR-OLD} boy got up late. Tom was woken up by his mother and quickly ran down the stairs. His mother told him that she wouldn't let him go to school without any food but he replied {THAT} he wasn't a child. Tom ran out of the house but he had to came {pis. COME} back because he forgot {tu pasuje: HAD FORGOTTEN} his school bag. When he arrived to {lepiej: AT} {THE} bus stop{,} he saw {A} bus and jumped on. This {moze lepiej: THAT, chyba , ze dzialo sie to dzis rano}morning Tom had to finish his maths homework so he asked Julie if she could lend him her book. Julie replied that she couldn't because then he would copy the answer. On the bus {IT} was very loud because the driver {HAD} turned on the radio. Tom couldn't concentrate{,} so he asked Mr Dennis to turn the radio down. When he didn't get {A lub ANY} reply{,} he leant forward and looked at the driver. His eyes were closed. The bus started to go down a top steep hill. Tom and Julie steered the heavy bus, which went faster and faster. An ambulance soon arrived and Mr Dennis was taken to hospital. No one was bleeding badly{,} only some student {moze lepiej: SOME STUDENTS lub ONE OF THE STUDENTS} had cuts and bruises. Tom and Julie became {THE} school bus heroes.
jeszcze: moze zamiast: he saw A bus, lepiej: he saw THE SCHOOL bus (bedzie jasniej)
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i: the bus started to go down A VERY steep hill (bez a top)

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