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My name’s Mirek.I’m live in Sulejówek.I]m married and i have two children.nt describe How looking my day. I get up at half past five. I have a shover and dressed.I’m doing breckfast and drink coffe.At quarter past six I lives home.I go to work my car.About ten minutes to seven I’m in work.I change my uniform and seven o’clock start workAt half past ten I have lunch.After twenty minuts I back to work,I’m finish work two forty five .I washing , change my uniform and arrive to home at fiften minutes past sixteen.I eat dinner. After dinner I and my wife go on shooping.Next I help my children to do their homework. If inhave free time I visit my friends.About half past nineteen I eat supper.After supper I like spend my free time wathing TV. Very like watch volleyball,footbal match and interesting films.At twenty three o’clock I go wash and go to bed.Then I like read a book and leasting miusic.

I'm - znaczy 'Ja jestem'
I live in Sulejówek.I'm married and I have two children.
*How 'looking my day' (my day looks).
I have a shoWer and GET dressed.'I'm' (nie, I HAVE) 'doing' (niepotr) breAKFAST and drink coffeE. At quarter past six I 'lives' (lives to znaczy 'mieszka'- LEAVE) home. I go to work BY car. About ten minutes to seven I'm in work. I change my uniform and 'seven o'clock start work' (start work at 7 o'clock) At
half past ten I have lunch. After twenty minutEs I'M back AT work. I finish work AT two forty five. I 'washing' (WASH), change my uniform and arrive
'to' (bez to) home at fiften minutes past 'sixteen' FOUR). After dinner 'I
and my wife' (my wife and I) go 'on' (bez on) shooping. If I have free time I visit my friends. About half past 'nineteen' (SEVEN) I eat supper. After supper I like TO spend my free time watChing TV. 'Very like watch volleyball,footbal match and interesting films' I like watching volleyball......very much). At
'twenty three' (ELEVEN). (Nie, ang. czas jest bazowany na 12 - rano a.m. a popoludniu p.m. tak, ze 2300hrs to 11p.m.) o'clock I 'go' (HAVE A) wash and go to bed. Then I like TO read a book and TO LISTEN to music.