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Poland is regarded as the country which has own festive customs and he is celebrating them. Is it this way really? In the sequence of several dozen last years the technological progress much increased itself. New inventions were supposed to provide to people with the comfortable life. In years 90 the Internet became available to everyone. With the help of the Internet it is possible to talk with the friend, to see the weather for the next day and what's more to do the shopping.
At one time they lasted for preparing for the Christmas and the Easter longer than today. Mums prepared traditional dishes, children decorated the Christmas tree. Today it is possible to buy ready eating by the Internet without going out. For the generality of people these beautiful, family holidays became only a free time. They prefer all the day to examine the TV than to go to the family, to talk and to reminisce.
The old generation, our grandmothers still are old tradycjonalne and are trying to pass their knowledge on to their children and grandsons. The new generation is constantly hard-pressed, he doesn't have time. They aren't practising festive customs of their ancestors. They think that it isn't needed for them.
Over the course of time new holidays of for example Halloween, the Valentine turned up at the calendar. Halloween is a holiday cared 31 October in the USA. In Poland it became popular at the end of years 90. Is cared 01 November. Mainly numerous parties are being organised in clubs, stage performances and screenings of a film. Valentines are copying the Slav called holiday with Midsummer Night's celebration. Today is cared 14 February. In love they are giving each other presents and they are writing poems to themselves.
World is changing and people are taking turns. In my opinion festive customs are important in the life since they are granting special character these a few holidays, they are becoming magic and unforgettable. The technological progress can lead the tradition to total becoming extinct. Then a holiday will differ in nothing from the ordinary day.

Poland is regarded as 'the' 'A' country which has ITS own festive customs and
'he' (od kiedy Polska jest HE?) IT 'is celebrating them' (celebrates them).
BUT is it this way really? In the sequence of 'several dozen last years' (cos tu nie tak albo several year, albo last years) the technological progress 'much' (niepotr) HAS increased 'itself' (niepotrz) (tremendously).
New inventions were supposed to provide 'to' (niepotr) people with 'the' 'A'
comfortable life. In 'years 90' (nie, In the 1990s) the Internet became available to everyone. With the help of the Internet it is possible to talk with
'the' 'A' friend, to see...
At one time 'they' (they to znaczy co?) lasted 'for preparing for' (nie rozumiem pojecia tutaj) 'the' (bez the) Christmas and 'the' (bez the) Easter longer than today. Mums prepared traditional dishes AND THE children
decorated the Christmas tree. Today it is possible to buy ready- 'eating' (ready to eat albo ready made) (ale co? food/meals) 'by' USING the Internet without going out. For the 'generality' MAJORITY of people these
beautiful, family holidays became only 'a free time' (a holiday from work). They prefer 'all the day' (na koncu zdania) to 'examine' WATCH the TV (all the....)than to go to the family, to talk and to reminisce.
The old generation, our grandmothers 'still are' (zla kol slow are still) 'old' VERY tradITIONAL and are trying to pass their knowledge onto their children. 'and grandsons' AND GRANDCHILDREN. The new generation is constantly hard-pressed, 'he' THEY 'doesn't' DON'T have ANY time.
Over the course of time new holidays of for example Halloween,
'the' (bez the) Valentine's DAY turned up 'at' ON the calendar. Halloween is a holiday 'cared'? 31 October in the USA. In Poland it became popular at the end of 'years 90' THE 1990s). 'Is cared' (nie rozumiem tego) IT is celebrated? ON 01 November. Mainly numerous parties are 'being' (niepotr) organised in clubs, stage performances and screenings of 'a' filmS (chyba wiecej jak jeden film) Valentines are copying the Slav called holiday with Midsummer Night's celebration.
'Today is cared'( dlaczego uzywasz 'cared?) 14 February. In love 'they' (ale kto lovers?) are giving each other presents and they are writing poems to 'themselves' (nie, to EACH OTHER).
THE world is changing and people are 'taking turns' (nie, also changing?). In my opinion festive customs are important in 'the' (bez the) life since they 'are granting' GRANT special character TO these 'a' (bez a) few holidays, they are becoming magicAL and unforgettable. The technological progress can lead the tradition to totalLY becomE extinct. Then a holiday will 'differ in nothing' (nie, ..will not differ in anything) from 'the' AN ordinary day.