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Living abroad – advantages and disadvantages

Nowadays most of people go abroad. There are many reasons why people decide to leave their own country to start a new life abroad. Especially young people dream about it. But do they know that it requires large commitment? A lot of people, particularly young people come back. Anyway living abroad has advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, living abroad wide your horizons. You can learn other language or improve already known. This is a really good way to communicate with the locals and starting to work. Secondly, you can also get to know the culture or customs of country. What is more, you often meet interesting people and make friends with them. As a result you see the world from a new perspective. Of course, you can fall in love. Besides, living there you can earn a lot of money and develop your career, talents.
However some people come back, therefore living abroad has disadvantages too. Most of all they left own family, friends so they can be lonely. Another problem is trouble with foreign language. Therefore they feel unsure and have problems with communications. Living abroad can be more expensive. You will spend much money for food and of course, you will pay for insurance. Besides, you will not have more time. Probably, you will be more busy.
On balance it seems that living abroad have as many disadvantages as positive aspects. You must remember. Living abroad is the best solution for people, who like new challenges and do not afraid of difficulties. The decision of whether go abroad or stay in your own country remains a matter of personal choice.

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