Prosze o sprawdzenie!! pilneee

to ma byc list formalny... stram sie o prace w odpowiedzi na nastepujace ogloszenie:
Au Paris and Home Helps placed througt Great Britian. to work 25 hours a week. work includes looking after children, housework and some cooking.. Applicants should be practical and like children but no previous exprience is neessary. driving license is useful. Period work june to end september. minimum age 17.

a to moj list. Prosze o sprawdzenie i ewentualnie dopisanie kilku zdan jezeli to konieczne. TO juz na jutro :( jestem slaba wiec baaaaaaaaaaaaardzo prosze o pomoc:



I am writing in response with regard to your advertisement which appeared in Dziennik, on 19 may 2007.I am interested your proposal relating Au Paris and home helps.



I am tweenty years old and I am study Psychology. I like very much children. I have with a good level of English and good results in uniwersity. i often play tennis and basketball. I like houserwork. I also have a first aid certificate ang I am in goog healthy.


iI was babysit in last summer. this a job .. (nauczyla mnie wiele???)Ihave experience in gastronomy, becesause my unce has a bar and I often help her when I do not go to uniwersity.


I am available during all june, september and october.
I look forwad to hearing from you.


Yours sincerely
XYZ

I am writing in regard to your advertisement which
>appeared in Dziennik, on 19 may 2007.I am interested your proposal
>relating to Au Pairs and home help.
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>
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>I am twenty years old and I am studying Psychology. I like children very much
>. I have a good level of English and good results in
>university. I often play tennis and basketball. I like housework. I
>also have a first aid certificate and I am in good health.
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>
>I worked as a babysitter last summer. This job taught me a great deal. I have experience in gastronomy, becesause my uncle has a bar
>and I often help him when I do not go to university.
>
>
>I am available all during june, september and october.

>I look forward to hearing from you.
>
>
>Yours sincerely
>XYZ

Dziekuje bardzo :*:*:*:*:*

Iam interested IN your proposal relating to Au Pairs and home help.
I have a good level of English and good results 'in' AT university.
I have experience in gastronomy 'becesause' BECAUSE my uncle has a bar
and I often help him when I do not go to university.
I am available all during June, September and October. (miesiace piszemy wielka litera)