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" discuss ways to improve the learning of foreign languages."
INTRODUCTION:Learning a foreign languages is very important. So, school should gives a great chance to learn and develop the ability to speak in foreign language.
SOLUTION:Learning a foreign languages is a very difficult task, therefore lesson could be nice and interesting. First of all during the lesson students should speak in foreign language and discuss a lot. Secondly, school should have many facilities: dictionaries, computers, english book(e.x) etc..Teachers fallow the lesson should uses computer to show presentations, a lot of maps and diferent diagrams. What is morestudents during should listen to the recording a lot and write many composition, letters, articles, projects in foreign language. Finally students should practice many situation e.x in the restaurant or shop.
COCNLUSION:I think, that everyone should learning foreign language, becouse this will help in the future.

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INTRODUCTION: Learning a foreign languages(nie, jak piszesz 'a' to znaczy ze bedziesz mowil o jednym jezyku, to dlaczego wtedy piszesz languages-l. mn?) is very important. So, school should 'gives' GIVE a great chance to learn and develop the ability to speak in A foreign language.
SOLUTION:Learning a foreign languages (to samo tutaj - albo mowisz o languages, i wtedy nie uzywaj 'a' albo o jednym languagE) is a very difficult task, therefore THE lesson could be nice and interesting. First of all during the lesson students should speak in A foreign language and discuss 'a lot' (ale co?,).
Secondly, THE school should have many facilities: dictionaries,
computers, english book (tylko jeden?) 'etc' (ciekawa jestem co to jest etc? nowa sukienka, nowe buty?)..

Teachers 'fallow' (sprawdz to slowo w slowniku - tutaj FOLLOW) the lesson should
'uses' (ale jak mowisz o teachers-l. mnoga to dlaczego uzywasz uses-3os.l.POJ?) computerS to show presentations, a lot of maps and difFerent diagrams. TO zdanie niema sensu - napisz jeszcze raz.

What is more students during (kogo? czego?) should listen to the recording a
lot and write many composition, letters, articles, projects in A foreign
language. Finally students should practice many situation 'e.x' (Nie, jak juz chcesz to uzywamy 'eg'). in 'the' A restaurant or A shop.
CONCLUSION: I think, that everyone should 'learning' LEARN A foreign language,
'becouse' (ej, no!!! w ktorej ksiazce to slowo znalazles? czy nawet nie umiesz przepisac bezblednie?) this will help (komu?) in the future.