proszę o sprawdzenie:)

hej :) jesli ktos moze to prosze o sprawdzenie i pomoc z blędami;) z gory dzieki.
mialo to byc opowiadanie z ok 15 phrasalami użytymi ;)

Last Saturday Sally got up earlier then as usual. She took off her pyjamas and had a wash. She prepared breakfast and turned on the radio but it was too loud so she turned down it. She hurrid up but she looked for her sunglasses. She was so nervous because she had to make it in her job. Suddenly her friend called up to her. She wanted to know whether Sally got over. She advised Sally that she should keep off the ice-cream and then she won't be ill. Sally always get on well with her friend so this time Kate helped her, too. Kate live close to house's Sally so she invented that she lend Sally her's own sunglasses. Sally looked at her watch and she went out. She waited for the bus and suddenly she looked a thief. She knew him because he robbed her one year ago. Sally ran away from this bus stop and she ran to her job. She went in the office building. Sally was so tired but she had to work. She had to look up some information in a book. but she was too nervous because of meeting with the thief. For that reason she gave up this occupation and she decided to go to the home. When Sally came back she gave back sunglasses to Kate. Kate told Sally that the thief who was met by Sally in the morning was turned in. It was so strange day!

She 'hurrid' (ortog) up, but she looked for her sunglasses. (cos tu nie tak)
She was so nervous because she had to make 'it' (ale co?) in her job.
She wanted to know whether Sally got over (kogo? czego?).
Sally always gOt on well with her friend so this time Kate helped her, too. Kate 'live' (ale Kate, to jest she-a she to 3os.l.poj) close to
'house's Sally' SALLY'S HOUSE so she invented that she SHOULD lend Sally 'her's' HER own sunglasses.
She waited for the bus and suddenly she 'looked' (zle slowo - tutaj SAW) a thief. Sally ran away from this bus stop and she ran to her 'job' (czy nie workplace?).
..but she was too nervous because of THE meeting with the thief. For that reason
she gave up this occupation and she decided to go 'to' (niepotr-) 'the' (niepotr) home. When Sally came back she 'gave back' RETURNED THE sunglasses to Kate. Kate told Sally that the thief who 'was met by Sally' SALLY MET in the morning was turned in. It was 'so' SUCH A strange day.

dzieki:) próba poprawy:
-she hurried up...and (zamiast but) she looked...
-She was so nervous because she had to make 'it' (ale co?) in her job.
znalazlam, ze make it = arrive in time i myślałam,że tak trzeba go użyć. a jak powinno być poprawnie?
-She wanted to know whether Sally got over (kogo? czego?). get over to nie jest wyzdrowieć?
-. Kate 'live' (ale Kate, to jest she-a she to 3os.l.poj) lives ?
-When Sally came back she 'gave back' RETURNED THE sunglasses to Kate. a nie może być właśnie to give back? bo tak znalazłam, że to phrasal od return, no a musze mieć 15 phrasali w pracy niestety:(
-Kate told Sally that the thief who SALLY MET in the morning was turned in.

pomoże ktoś?:)

...she had to make it on time for her job.
She wanted to know whether Sally got over (tutaj trzeba 'her illness')
Kate lives
When Sally came back she gave back THE sunglasses to Kate.
Kate told Sally that the thief whoM Sally met in the morning was 'turned in' (moze lepeij CAUGHT-zlapany).