Prośba o sprawdzenie błedów

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Witam mam na zadanie napisanie i nauczenie się speech:/ Więc mam ogromną prośbę o sprawdzenie błedów lub dodanie uwag. Z góry dziękuje


I like more Christmas than Easter beacuse mostly durning them it's rain snow. Always on Christmas I go to mountain to my grandmother. Every day i ski and spend time in family circle.Christmas is more family and cherfull.I very like traditional dishes such as: moczka, makówki, beetroot soup, carp especially when my grandmother cook. Durning Christmas supper is remarkably atmosphere which i can't do describe and waiting for presents. After them we go to midnight mass. I can’t wait to do next Christmas.
I like 'more Christmas than Easter' (przeczytaj w podrecznikach jak sie podobne rzeczy pisze...I like (co) wiecej jak (co- I like Christmas more than Easter) 'beacuse' (prosze to poprawic- bo juz mi sily brak poprawiac to) mostly 'durning' (ortog) 'them' (zle o czym tutaj mowa?) it's 'rain snow' (albo jedno albo drugie). Always 'on' AT Christmas I go to THE mountainS to my grandmother.
Every day 'i' (I duza litera) ski and spend time in MY family circle.Christmas is more family (brakuje to slowa)and 'cherfull' (ortog). 'I very like' (to nie istnieje w jez. ang - I LIKE VERY MUCH - albo I like) traditional dishes such as: 'moczka, makówki' (to tez po ang), beetroot soup, carp especially when my grandmother 'cook' (tutaj to jest czas 3os.l.poj - prosze poprawic).
'Durning' (ortog) Christmas supper THERE is A remarkably atmosphere which 'i' (prosze poprawic) can't 'do' (a co to robi tutaj?) describe 'and' (cos tu nie tak) waiting for presents. After 'them' (troche rozwin - po otrzymaniu) we go to Midnight Mass.
I can't wait 'to do' FOR next Christmas.
Thx bardzo:) nie jestem za dobry z angla:/ Poprawiłem błedy i dopisałem kilka zdań proszę o spojrzenie na to i zobaczenie czy nie ma błedów. Z góry dzięki:)

I like Christmas more than Easter . Mostly during Christmas it’s snow. Always at Christmas I go to the mountains to my grandmother. Every day I ski and spend time in my family circle. Easter it for Christian is sad holidays because Christ is die in cross. I don’t like Monday after Easter because when I want splash water on girls alone I am wet. Christmas is more family than Easter. Everyone together decorate Christmas tree .I very like traditional dishes such as: moczka, makówki, beetroot soup, and carp especially when my grandmother cooks. During Christmas supper there is a remarkably atmosphere which I can't describe. After supper I wait in presents. After receive presents we go to Midnight Mass. I can’t wait for next Christmas

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