Prosze o sprawdzenie: Opis wydarzenia

Witam,
byłbym bardzo wdzięczny za sprawdzenie poniższego wypracowania. Dziękuje za pomoc i uwagi:)


Temat: Czasopismo młodzieżowe ukazujące się w języku angielskim poprosiła czytelników pis wystawy zoologicznej. Opisz wystawę, którą zwiedził-eś/aś.




The zoological exhibition, that took place last week was a big event in my town. It was arranged in front of my school, because there is a a lot of free space and also in my opinion it was the best place for that. In my town threre is no zoo, so this exhibiton was expected to attract a lot of people.

The preparation to this exhibition started a month before the planned opening ceremony. The organizers had to build a big tent, where the whole exhibiton was held. It was as large as five football pitches. It was a big challange but everything was ready after three weeks. The inhabitants were pessimistic, but when they saw a gorgeous, white tent they changed their mind. The organizers invited more then one hunderd exhibitors from the whole country and even from foreign countries.

The exhibition started at 6.00 P.M on Fryday. At first there was a show and all exhibitors, one by one were presenting their animals at special “catwalk”. A lot of visitors had come to see this ceremony. There was a lot of different animals. However there wasn’t place for bigger animals, such the elephants.

It took me three days to see all animals. I was very impressed and excited. The exhibition was a huge success. More then one hunderd thousend people visited it. Organizers are planning a second exhibitons now. I can’t wait to it.



Pozdrawiam

The zoological exhibition, 'that' (ja wole 'which' tutaj) took place last week was a big event in my town. It was arranged in front of my school, because there is a a lot of free space THERE and also in my opinion, it was the best 'place' (mozna tez 'location') for that.
It was a big challEnge, but everything was ready after three weeks.
The 'inhabitants'( moze 'locals') were pessimistic, but when they saw a gorgeous, white tent they changed their mind. The organizers invited more 'then' THAN one 'hunderd' (ortog) exhibitors from the whole country and even (some) from foreign countries.
The exhibition started at 6.00 P.M on 'Fryday' (ortog). At first there was a
show and all THE exhibitors, one by one 'were presenting' PRESENTED their animals 'at' ON A special “catwalk".
However there wasn't ANY place for bigger animals, such AS 'the' (niepotr) elephants.
It took me three days to see all THE animals. I was very impressed and
excited.
More then one 'hunderd' (ortog) 'thousend' (ortog) people visited it. Organizers are planning a second 'exhibitons' (tutaj l. poj exhibition) now. I can't wait 'to' FOR it.

Dzieki:)